| ".entanglement." Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
Reviewed By: KaibaGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 21:23 CST
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Hey there, my good friend (or not...but still)! It's been more than a YEAR since you've updated...don't you think your loyal fans deserve a little bit of yaoi love? ::Mokuba-esque puppy eyes::
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Reviewed By: anubiset On: June 11, 2004 13:07 CDT
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I love it. I couldn`t stop laughing. Please do more.
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Reviewed By: KaibaGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2004 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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AHHHHHHHHHHH!!! FUCKING UPDATE GOD DAMN YOU!! Please? I love this story and I need more...if you don't update, I'm gonna cry! v.v
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Reviewed By: Tsuru On: March 12, 2004 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Neeeeeeeeedd more to reeeeeaaaaaddddddd!!!!! T_T more more more more more!!! XD Wonderful, beautiful. Gotta love it. Make more!!!
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Reviewed By: Jou Jou bean (Don't ask...) On: January 25, 2004 01:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fucking love this story. I actually based my RP Jou off of this fanfic ^_^. It inspires me! Please please please update it or I'll be forced to sick my Evil Cats of Doom on you! (Okay okay so it's an empty threat but ya get the idea ~_^)
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Reviewed By: KaibaGirl(member...but too lazy to sign in) On: November 26, 2003 22:31 CST
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Must you do this to me?!? *angsty sigh* Without this story my brain will wither and I may forget what good yaoi is! Please, for the sake of this world and the sake of my yaoi-dependant mind, UPDATE!!! PLEASE!!!!! *begs*
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Reviewed By: PsychoticInnocence [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2003 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol! this is by far one of my favorite fics.. ever. mind you, this is only about the second fic I've ever reviewed and I've been reading fics for a few years now. ^_^; I absolutely love this fic. It's hillarious and clever. Post more I shall find you and bite you, and I bite hard! RAWR!
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Reviewed By: ~*Angel*~ On: October 18, 2003 06:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please please, continue it! I absolutely love it... You'll make me cry if you don't! I'll love you forever and ever if you do ^_^
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Reviewed By: Joujou On: September 29, 2003 03:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my hell its wonderful. Abso-fucking-lutely wonderful! I love it... He's such a slut XD. Please continue!
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Reviewed By: KaibaGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 16:12 CDT
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WOOHOO!!! YEAH!!! I knew emailing you would pay off!! Uh-huh, oh yeah, go Allie, indeed!!! Anyways...I LAUGHED MY ASS OFF!!! YOU MUST WRITE MORE NOW!!! NOWNOWNOW!!!! And seriously...Joey and Yugi better end up together. More soon pleaseness! |
Reviewed By: Seto On: August 09, 2003 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! |
Reviewed By: KaibaGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 15:31 CDT
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AHHHHHH!!!! Good story!!! Me wants MOOOOORE!!! NOW!! It's been far too long since I started reading this. Now you will write more and make us all happy. And no, that is not a request. PLEASE MORE!! |
Reviewed By: Suzaku Darkfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 20:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I used to stalk-- er... read this story on FF.net! I'm so glad I found it here! FF.net can be a crock, ne? Keep writing, this is one of the funniest stories I've ever read! Peace! |
Reviewed By: a hobo with a sword [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 07:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooohhhh ryou soooooo coollll!!!! don't ask i like tour stor it's funn and ryou is portrayed nicly.....es he has a nice ass phweeeeee!!!! |
Reviewed By: Tsuchi no Sennyo On: March 14, 2003 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad I found this story! When it got deleted on fanfiction.net I was heartbroken. Please write more! I'm dying to find out what happens! This is my favourite couple...two favourite couples that is. |
Reviewed By: Tsuchi no Sennyo On: March 14, 2003 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad I found this story! When it got deleted on fanfiction.net I was heartbroken. Please write more! I'm dying to find out what happens! This is my favourite couple...two favourite couples that is. |
Reviewed By: Kendra On: February 12, 2003 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luved thed way u portrayed Jou! Hurry up and write the 3rd Chapter. |
Reviewed By: ananda On: January 25, 2003 20:23 CST
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me like horny jou. more pleasethankyou! |
Reviewed By: Lemon-Skittle [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 01:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even better than the first! Whoo-hoo! Some of my favourite lines...
"Or Mai fighting other yaoi fangirls for the last Gravitation doujinshi at the Tokyo hentai expo. THAT'S LOUD."
"Not Utena! Aren't there lesbians in Utena?! No Seto! Don't be someone you're not."
"Weeee! Like finger paints!"
"Hehe. I'm am ass kisser. Now Joey, nobody likes a kiss ass."
*falls over laughing* |
Reviewed By: Lemon-Skittle [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 00:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how you've portayed the characters, but I like how you've portayed how Joey views them even better. My favourite line: "There are some things money can't buy. For everything else, there's Ryou." *snickers* |
Reviewed By: JayzMee On: January 04, 2003 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAY! Dai-chan, Pyrro, Dani, whatever the hell it is I call you now- YAAAY!!! Urgh when Ff.Net went all stupid (bastards) I thought I'd never see your work again... and alas! I have found it!
Tehehe- I think I need a new name, everybody knows what JayzMee is now. Grr. gurgles, I missed you! I miss you! I missed your writing! You know I think it's the best, and that I don't really give a shit what you say ^_^ I love entanglement, which isnt really fair- I'm one of the priveleged few who could be over at your house getting a sneak preview to the fifth chapter, and what am I doing? I'm trapped from the snow, sitting at home and watching taped Bebop reruns. Ah, I miss my anime obsession it's sliping away... nevermind, I'm prolly pissing off all the people who want to actually read the reviews... not that it matters you've only got FOUR! hahaha, you're such a loser ^_^
BUT IT'S FUCKING GOOD FANFIC ANYWAYS!!!
with my greatest of affections, your loving (and better older sister ^_^ |
Reviewed By: KnH On: January 01, 2003 20:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, I'm so glad you posted this on MediaMiner! My cousin and I thought this story was amazing, but it got taken down! Stupid ff.net and their stupidness! Good work! Continue soon or I will unleash my army of drunken hobbits on you! |
Reviewed By: Karre On: December 23, 2002 12:55 CST
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Whoo-hoo! ME loves me some Bakura Strawberry Ass! Lucky Jou! Wheee! I love this! I always knew Jou was nothing but a sex crazed blonde (not that it's a bad thig, cause it isn't). Squee! I feel so happy now! Keep writing! You rock! Kitchen sex with syrup rocks! Bathroom sex rocks! And most importantly...VOYUERISM ROCKS!!! and so does whipped cream ^-^
~Karre |
Reviewed By: Nakuru Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 00:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh... ^_^ You should write more. **Grinz** It was reall good. |
Reviewed By: Yami-Jen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2002 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I loved this story on ff.net and then it got deleted! I thought I would never see it again! Please update soon! I think I got through chappie four or so earlier....By the way, you do a great job with Joey's pov! ^_^ |
