| Reviewed By: jammie lady of mayhem  On: January 04, 2004 08:45 CST Rating(s):
 Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
 Unique, and the lemons are well written, they are not so straight forward to be vulgar nor barely there. Also the plot is well developed and you have a very believable OC definitly not a mary-sue type. Keep up the good work!!! : )
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