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Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overall, a very entertaining and engrossing story, though I was hoping for a bit more resolution at the end. Hurry up with the sequel: I'm hoping for a happier ending for our poor Pharaoh! |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! I dont want Yugi 2 be with Seto I want Yugi 2 be with Yami
Yugi: How do u think I feel. I'm being raped and tourted by an insane Yami. I want my Yami 2 save me not Seto |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 05:59 CST
Comment/Review:
This insanity is all 'YOUR' fault!!!!! So continue else your gonna be in 'BIG TROUBLE!!!! |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 05:57 CST
Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 05:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Yami: NONONONONONONONONO!!!! NOT SETO YAMI YAMI!!!!! AND FOR THE LAST TIME YAMI!!!!! *goes to maim leev*
*groan* Oh brother... *tries holding him back* NOW YOU'VE GOT 'HIM' P***ED OFF!!!!
Seto: LALALALALALALA!!! *frolicking about* I'M SO HAPPY!!!! LALALALALA!!!! *singing* #I'M YUGI CRAZY, I'M YUGI MAD, I'VE BEEN LIKING YUGI SINCE I WAS LITTLE LAD!!!! HEY!!!
O_OUUUUUU.... >() |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 24, 2003 20:41 CST
Comment/Review:
That was a great chapter!! I really hope you post the last chapter soon! I want to see what happens to poor Yugi! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 19:09 CST
Comment/Review:
More....More! I have followed this story for a long while and really! you are such a cliffie! It is great, continue posting quickly |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 11:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Yami: NNNNNNNNNOOOOOO!!!!! *overdramatised sobbing* I was this close to holding him... *drops to his knees sobbing*
-_-* *takes him by the scruff of his neck* PULL YOURSELF TOGETHER YOU MAN... o_0? UH... SPIRIT... WHATEVER!!!! *starts bitch slapping him*
Seto: *runs to strangle leev* I'M GONNA KILL YOU FOR EVEN THINKING OF SACRIFICING MOKUBA!!!!!!
I... suggest you... continue leev-chan. He's... getting... pretty... violent... ACK!!!!
Seto: GRRRRRRRR *lashing out but held back by his trenchcoat*
URGGH... Seto calm down!!!! *pulling him back* RUN LEEV-CHAN!!!! RUN FOR YOU LIFE!!!! CONTINUE WITH THE STORY!!!!!! HURRY!!!!!!
Yugi: *comes in and kisses Seto on the lips*
Seto: *blushes with all the colours of red in existence*
Yami: O.O... *Yugi then knees Seto in his 'Twinkie' ^_____________^* ^()^ YAY TAKE THAT BILLIONAIRE BOY!!!!!
Seto: argh... *clutching at his crotch* |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 10:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter 2
Yugi: *sniff* U said I'd be back with Yami
It'll be alright I'm sure leev wont hurt u (much)
Yugi: ;_; |
Reviewed By: Lily22 On: January 20, 2003 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... you're evil. Stupid cliffy. *stabs cliffy with... random sharp objects*
Oh, but Mokuba's so kawaii. :-D
Erm, please continue? And the chapter's not showing up on FF.net... you might want to check that, or maybe it just needs a bit o' time.
Continue soon! Onegai! Please! I'll never get a decent night's sleep until you do! |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 05:10 CST
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Ryou: YOU WERE GONNA SNAP MY NECK!?!?!?!?!!?
>. |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 05:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Ryou: O.OU...... >(). |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 05:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Ryou: O.O'
Bakura: uh... Aibou?
Ryou: O.OU...... >(). |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 05:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Ryou: O.O'
Bakura: Uh oh...uh Aibou?
Ryou: O.OU...... >(). |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 04:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the last chapter.
Yugi: YEY!!! I'm going 2 be rescued
Yep. U'll be back in the arms of Yami in no time
Yugi: ^-^
Yami:^_^ |
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