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Reviewed By: Amy_Rose(not logged in yet) On: April 22, 2005 20:59 CDT
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I can't believe that $#%^! Yugi: Nither can I! @##$$%$$%@$@^%#$%@$@%#$^$#%@#$%$#%@%!!!!! Me: Yugi! *gives him a high five* Yami: Why are you of all people giving him high fives for cursing?!?! Me: Because I don't think that Mistress Evil 14 has a story like this! I think she's just trying to @#$$ the author off. Ryou: Why do you try to take all of the hikari's innocence? Me: Not the hikari's. Everyone else's! Bakura: Can't wait for sequel!
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Reviewed By: Amy_Rose(not logged in yet) On: April 22, 2005 20:51 CDT
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Yes for a sequel. Please make this a YY/Y fic! I love that couple! And B/R is cute too! And so is S/J! Continue Writing!
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Reviewed By: RyuArashi On: March 17, 2003 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe it took me this long to discover this story....I *love* it! I *adore* it! It's...it's...words fail me....Of course, there will be a sequel...right? Right?! I actually printed out every single page....Great story, girl...I hope Yugi chooses Yami,though. I'm *very fond of that pairing. Then again, why can't he choose *both* of them? It could work..... |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 09:18 CST
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^()^ HI again!!!!! So how are... o_0? *looks at the latest reviews about Evil Mistress 14's claim* WHAT!?!?!?!?!?!? *goes looking all over the web for Evil Mistress 14's "story"* I can't find YOUR STORY ANYWHERE!!!!! You lying BEEPBEEPBEEPBEEPBEEPBEEPBEEPBEEPBEEPBEEP!!!!! BEEEEEEP!!!!! *censor machine on swear words explodes*
KKKKKKAABBBBBBBBBBBBOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!
^________^ There leev I shouted at her for ya!!!!!
YGO muses: @()@
Anyway I think that Evil Mistress 14 was just joking ¬_¬ (she better be)otherwise she would have put up proof for it and made a complaint towards the webmaster instead of on your review section...
*points accusingly at Evil Mistress 14* Evvvvviiiill.... Evvvvviiiiilll!!!! *hisses and makes a cross with her fingers as if warding of a vampire* Now what was I gonna say? Oh yeah GET!!! THAT!!!! SEQUEL!!!! UP!!!!!!!!
Seto and Yami: YEAH!!!!! GGGRRRRRR!!!!! *held back by leashes* |
Reviewed By: leev [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 11:28 CST
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I don't know who you are or what story you have written, but this one is totally mine. I worked on this for over a month. If you have issues, please contact me at leev96@hotmail.com. You shouldn't post stuff like that without talking to the author first. Shame on you. |
Reviewed By: Mistress Evil 14 On: February 01, 2003 11:23 CST
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I own this fanfic, i wrote it, Not LEEV, ME!!! The author is a BITCH!!!!!!!!!
The author copied off me!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lady Saturn Eclipse On: January 31, 2003 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOOVE THE STORY AND THE PLOT BUT I WANT TO KNOW WHAT IS THE SEUQEL CALLED? |
Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummm cool story *looks at Yugi*
Yugi: *Hopping around on 1 foot singing the cheeky girls song*
Perhaps i sounldn't have let him look at the other. I cant wait 4 the sequel. Keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 08:27 CST
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And if your wondering how you killed my muses... they got frustrated that you didn't sort out their... erhem... love life... *pointing at Yugi, the centre of all innocence* So they died... or in yami's case, died again... |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 08:11 CST
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*whilst performing CPR at the same time on Seto and Yami* Oh... BTW since... *check pulse* grr... Valentines Day is coming up I'll be inviting some readers to be... *kiss of life* guest stars in my fic 'The New Authoress' *5 pushes on the chest* You get to go on a Blind Date with anybody in the Yu-gi-oh cast... *checks pulse* GAH!!!! *repeats process* All I need to know is... *kiss of life again* yes or no... *five pushes on the chest* If yes, Who you want to date... *checks pulse* -_-***** *starts punching at their chests to get a pulse* and where you want to go for your date... *checks pulse* Still nothing... *grabs a bucket of water and some cables connects to the two dead dodos to a fuse box and turns it on*
Seto and Yami: *electrocuted* AIAIAIAIAIAIAIAIAIAIAIAIAIAIAIAIAIAIAI!!!!!!! *in the process of a short circuit they catch on fire* AIAIAIAIAIAIAIAIAIAIAAIIAIAIAIAIAI!!!!!!!
*splashes the bucket of water to put out fire* ^_______^ YOUR ALIVE!!!! *dances happily*
Yami and Seto: O_O' *blink, blink* x________X *dies again/dies again again*
D'OH!!!! *absolutely fuming grabs a foldable chair and start thwacking the two corpses*
THWACK THWACK THWACK THWACK!!!!
*kicks them about and starts throwing them against the wall then runs off and does a body slam on them both*
Bakura: That looks fun *joins in*
Ryou: You call that resusictation!?!?!?!?
No... it's called emergency resusictation... *does body slam on yami's chest*
Yami: Oooph... *sits up looking a bit dazed*
Yugi: Oh Yami *hugs him*
Yami: O.O *blink, blink* ^___________^
Bakura: *body slamming Seto* Still dead...
Yugi: ^__________^ O_O... *walks over to Seto and kisses him.
Yami: O()O *Seto wakes up*
Seto: *blushes, Yugi knees him in the noggin'* AAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIEEEEE!!!!!!! *Yugi walks off*
I think you know what I want to see Yugi be with...
Seto: ...why... |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 06:02 CST
Comment/Review:
NOW GET ON WITH THAT SEQUEL!!!!! >_ |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 05:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seto and Yami: *tearing at their hair in frustration* GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! *dies/dies again* x________X *Yami's technically already dead so...*
Bakura: Hmm... the power of three... *sarcastically* Gee... i wonder where I heard 'THAT' before... Oh yeah... those stupid witches from that dodgy flick 'Charmed' keep chanting it like a bunch of baka baboons!!!! *gets whacked by Sam's mallet*
BAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!
I'LL HAVE YOU KNOW!!!! I LIKE THAT SHOW SO SHUT YER YAP YOU ALBINO MUSKRAT!!!!!!!!
Bakura: @()@
-_-' ok so the 'power of three' thing was a bit on the corny side... ^_____^ But I'll forgive you since you only had 45 minutes to type it in... I'll also forgive you for killing my Kaiba and Yami muse if you make that sequel you mentioned. So in the meantime... I'll give a standing ovation CONGRATULATIONS!!!! somebodyz finished their fic people!!!!
People: HIP HIP HORRAY HIP HIP HORRAY HIP HIP HIP HORRAY!!!! #FOR SHE'S A JOLLY GOOD FELLOW FOR SHE'S A JOLLY GOOD FELLOW FOR SHE'S A JOLLY GOOD FELLOW!!!! WHICH NOBODY CAN DENY.
WHICH NOBODY CAN DENY...
^()^ #WHICH NOBODY CAN DENY!!!!! FOR SHE'S A JOLLY GOOD FELLOW FOR SHE'S A-# -_- Ok that's enough people *people shut up* >()_ |
Reviewed By: sweetdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 00:33 CST
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oooooooooooooooooooooooo that was a quick ending but really good. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 26, 2003 21:13 CST
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Your right, that was a quick ending. But it was still a happy one! I love happy endings! I hope you DO write the sequal. I'll look forward to it. |
Reviewed By: AnimeAna [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 19:00 CST
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*chanting* SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! |
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