| "Saiyajins Return" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Catgoddess1012000 On: December 10, 2003 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the grammar and spelling just needs to be checked at least 4 or 5 times that it. i love the story don't stop it's getting really good ( i like what is happing with goku but, what will vegeta do with so much lust for him? i wounder..... i can him with his lust problem...>:)
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Reviewed By: m.i.m. On: November 30, 2003 13:23 CST
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i just started reading and although i don't like OC this much kurai e raife are fine characters... but i'm dying to see goku and vegeta togheter. write more soon ok?
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Reviewed By: Satan's WIddle Hellper On: November 23, 2003 22:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...I HAVE to know; what's the deal with Kurai and Vegeta? Are they gonna end up having a fling? I wouldn't mind reading it and reviewing it. I just severely dislike Bulma. Keep it up.
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Title: Saiyajins Return
Reviewed By: Lullaby On: November 13, 2003 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Good ! I want more! And is there something between the two siblings??? ^-^I'm curious! Continue your good work. Emmy
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Title: Ch 7
Reviewed By: Moonshine_587 On: October 15, 2003 16:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooooh really good so far! I like your style of writing, and I hope you update soon. Thanks for a good read.
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Title: Ch 7
Reviewed By: Moonshine_587 On: October 15, 2003 16:58 CDT
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Ooooh really good so far! I like your style of writing, and I hope you update soon. Thanks for a good read.
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Reviewed By: Myself On: August 20, 2003 17:59 CDT
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*more chapters
eh...heh |
Reviewed By: Myself On: August 20, 2003 17:58 CDT
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HOW could I not discover this sooner?! Please post more quickly! |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice ficcy you have here!!!
Whats this about a special piccy?? I want it! Ok I'll have a crack at guessing the pairings..
Welll Vege wants the girl.. but then Ray seems intersted in Vegeta.. Goku is just a baka.... umm.. I can see Vegeta/Ray for some reason..
BUT since Geta wants the girl I will make it Vegeta/Kurai
Goku/Raife
But if Im wrong can I still have the piccy!!! Please!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything about this story is great, Gemi! I am really enjoying it and you write Vegeta soooo well!! I would have loved to see the expression on his face as he listened to that conversation between the siblings! lol! And being afraid of snakes and worms! haha! Priceless! Simply priceless! Keep up the good work and thank you soooo much for reviewing my own work! Your awesome! Love ya!
~Ami |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: July 30, 2003 08:59 CDT
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*blinks* you're probably wondering why there's a big ol chunck missing in my last review... I don't no what happened... *rubs temples* but the part that should be there is...
Raife hissed, flustered.
And just in case it didn't work again... Its the part where Raife is looking for his pants and his sis is being all grumpy ^_^
Now *for the second time today... finally* Onward to chapter 6!! |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: June 28, 2003 20:48 CDT
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It's great so far! hope you continue. it sounds like both Ray and Goku have the jots for Vegeta. but then again, who wouldn't?
not me! |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: July 30, 2003 09:08 CDT
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*Those brainless toadies* *giggles* I like it I like it ^_^
And true, not everyone wants to wear spandex... but when I rule the world *not if, but when* all good looking men with hot bodied will have to wear it *cackles evilly*
True, it was a bit short... but I don't mind ^_^ you just keep working on it at your own pace okay?
~Winged Revenge~ |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: July 30, 2003 08:54 CDT
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Fear not! No one scared me away! I've just been away from my laptop for three weeks due to a Geology trip and a holiday ^_^
I loved chapter five!!
The above has to be my favourite bit!! *hehehe* And I'm so proud of you guys... the updates were fairly close together!! So kudos to you ^_^
*runs off to read chapter 6* |
Reviewed By: Winged Revenge On: June 01, 2003 03:36 CDT
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YAAAY!! New chapter ^_^
Poor Kurai, I take it something nasty happened to her *makes a sad face*
And I love the Vegeta shower scene, I just love a yummy Saiya-jin all wet... I have this thing about water ^_^ I love to swim and stuff ^_~
That was good... but you better keep writing! I look forward to the next installment!! *if that's how you spell it* *heh* ^_^; |
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