| "In The Beginning..." Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Ericedwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 09:39 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!
Chapter one was beautifully done. I've only read one or two with Midoriko in it and I think it's a character that begs to be explored. To imagine that she has a daughter is intriguing and the power of the child may equal or even exceed Kagome's. I can't wait to read more about Akiko and what role she will play. And I really do want to know who the father is!
I hope you will be able to update soon!
~Eri |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2002 21:43 CST
Comment/Review:
this story is really original. i've never read anything remotely similar to this before... i really hope you plan on continuing this. i think most inu fans take the well for granted and don't put too much thought into its existance. in the first movie kikyo says that the well is made out of a god tree's wood, which is entwined with the strands of time (which is what allows time travel). are you going to use that? or did you have something entirely different planned?
Mara |
