| "Sweet Sweet Kisses Series" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: BlueRag [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 17:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I say this once- but mimiato does succ succ a nutsacc cuz! Koumi-Loc Fan foe Life..
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Title: What the heck
Reviewed By: Chipmunk man [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.K, one that Taiora, Hikari, and Mimato is really weird. Two, I PICKED UP LIKE 100 SPELLING MISTAKES!!!! THE STORY IS IN 1ST PERSON, NOT ANYTHING ELSE!!! Besides that the stories good. BUT PASS ENGLISH NEXT TIME!!!!!
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: Yolei On: January 13, 2004 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiya loved it and will love d next chapter even more if u write it cause i'm a kenyako fan i luv u for a kenyako and i'll personally track u down and kill u if u don't write it ^_^ (just kidding, please, please, please rite the next chapter) my e-mail address is shadow_of_light_@hotmail.com and i want u to e-mail me when u have writen
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Reviewed By: Foxy On: August 21, 2003 04:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just thought that it was great! |
Reviewed By: lilac kamiya On: September 22, 2001 08:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool fic :) |
Reviewed By: krimsonkiller On: October 12, 2001 23:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is a nice fic.
My $0.02:I think Tai's was the best setup, and as far as kari comment on her English teacher, I don't even want to see my teachers at all let alone in class. Just a suggestion, and don't take it personally but, try making the stories longer.
If you want to flame me,insult me,or what have you e-mail me at krimson_killer@hotmail.com |
