Reviewed By: Katrina [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 11:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The writing in here is very good; I like the emotion in the characters. My one qualm about this story is the ending. "It was just a dream" in my opinion is a very overdone concept, and it makes the rest of the emotion in your story seem not that important. Otherwise, however, you did a nice job.
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