| "I'll Show Him" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Kari B. On: September 19, 2001 16:08 CDT
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LOOOOVE the story!!!!
Write more pweeeeze????^_^ |
Reviewed By: Lilac Kamiya On: September 22, 2001 08:47 CDT
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Me being a huge Taiora fan this is a great fic...hurry and write more please if you will like to e-mail me my address is
lilac216@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: Leetah On: September 26, 2001 20:21 CDT
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I...Like it I suprisingly enough I like it!!! |
Reviewed By: Angel of Light On: September 30, 2001 18:01 CDT
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Love the story E-mail me at fyreranger@yahoo.com!!! |
Reviewed By: krimsonkiller On: October 07, 2001 21:44 CDT
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First of all *applause*(and lot's of it.)second of all nice work.
My $0.02:This is a well thought out story, and is what a romance fic should be.(and if I'm wrong your the best BSer I have ever "met". |
Reviewed By: Chibi-chan On: October 14, 2001 14:03 CDT
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Well, I have nothing against Taiora, I don't care for it really, but...the whole basis of the story was shallow. First of all, Taichi immediately begins noticing Sora because she changed her look? Puh-lease. It's like saying that only the looks of a person matter, not personality.
You'll also need to work more on your grammar. Get someone to beta-read your fic for you first, before you post it.
Kkat842@aol.com |
