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| "Delicious Irony" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Title: sequel plz
Reviewed By: this is cool On: May 25, 2005 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i hope they finaly av sx they really love each other sequel plz
| Reviewed By: lee-lee On: May 30, 2004 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it i hope u do a sequel!!!!!11
| Reviewed By: Bekah-chan On: March 12, 2003 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(looking for the #11 in the rating boxs)
Where is it? :sigh: Looks like I won't be able to give you an acurate rating. Hmm... I know! I give this fic(and ALL your other fics) eleven stars on all rating accounts.
*********** See? -^__^-
And yes, I really like your sequal idea.^^ | Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 13:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've enjoyed reading this sooo much. I love your stile *happygrin*
Tank Girl | Reviewed By: Goku's Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 22:40 CST
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a very big round of applause can be heard through out my head! i really enjoy your writing! | Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 07:20 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It just never ceases to amaze me when a fic of this quality, with 60 hits, only has TWO reviews!! WHAT IS WRONG WITH THE MEMBERS OF MM!! arrrrrgh!! EVERYONE reviews at the evilness that is ff.net!! ~out of breath~
Sorry about that!! I actually came here searching out your NEW fic that I read on Goku X Vegeta ML, so that I could review it here (I'm too shy to post on a big ML! LOL) but read this one since it isn't here yet.
I LOVED THIS FIC!!! SO much passion, yet it's humorous AND angsty at the same time! My favorite bit was the chocolate-covered finger sucking. MMMMMMM!!!
I'm going to go with the majority here, it was a GORGEOUS fic, but leave it as a one-shot. It stands so well on its own that it truly doesn't need a sequel. The ending is bittersweet, and sometimes that's a refreshing change from all the happy-ever-after fics out there. As it stands, the reader is left to his/her own conclusions of what will happen next, but we do have the knowledge that Vegeta has realized what has been happening between them, and Goku knows that he knows. So even where it ended, with neither of them fulfilled, we all know that it WILL be a happy ending, but we can follow our own imaginations to the conclusion.
Sorry I rambled, but you just did a BEAUTIFUL job with this fic. | Reviewed By: QueenSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wah, that was certainly an original ficcy! *glomps Vegeta and Goku* Vegeta's childish possessiveness towards the cake made me laugh, especially when he yells "Give it back!" XD
I'd love to see a sequel, but sometimes it's more realistic to leave them apart. Either way, I'll keep following your great fics ~_^ *dances away* | Reviewed By: Spencers13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 12:30 CST
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I liked the rest of your stories, and this one is no exception! Nicely done! The humor is what I liked most, followed closely by the naughtiness of Vegeta licking the chocolate off of Goku wherever he could. *shiver* Ooooo!
I would like to see a sequel as well, but it wouldn't exactly be necessary. QueenSaiyan is right, sometimes it is more realistic to leave them apart. But for us hopless romantics... we like get-togethers! ^_^
Great story, and be sure I'll read any more you post up! |
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