| "Blinded" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: chablis videl On: April 11, 2005 07:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i totally enjoyed reading this. please finish writing the story i cant wait to find out what happens, like will gohan and videl get together in the end. please finish. i loved this story.
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: April 08, 2004 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic. PLEASE finish the fic. That is one of the best Gohan fanfics ever. It was getting so good, please finish soon.
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: April 08, 2004 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic. PLEASE finish the fic. That is one of the best Gohan fanfics ever. It was getting so good, please finish soon.
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 17:52 CDT
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For other fans of this fic: this fic is also posted in a slightly more complete version at fanfiction.net
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Reviewed By: Ev / GohanGirl On: March 22, 2004 21:04 CST
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this was REALLY good. I read it over and over. this has got 2 be my Fav Gohan fic, and believe me i read a lot of Gohan fics!! when i was reading it i didnt want it to end so please add more!!
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2004 19:07 CST
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DON'T KILL THIS FIC, DAMN IT!! WRITE MORE, I BEG OF THEE!! *sob*
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2003 20:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The pain of a tormented soul, the rage of lost inocence. This is the reson I love fanfictions. You capture the fealings of insanity with such tallent and grace. You are a master, and I bow to you. The demons of my mind praise you, and your pain. PS: UPDATE!!
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 17:35 CST
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Update, damn it!!
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Reviewed By: pyro12 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Some gramatical errors, but everything else is great. I love angsty Gohan fics!!
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Reviewed By: 13angel On: November 14, 2003 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! it dosent seem that oc to me i think if it happen your way this probally how he end up> emotionaly anyway.i cant wait for you to up date
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Reviewed By: Arbron On: July 13, 2003 11:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a great story and I hope you update soon!
Just one little flaw...
Why does Gohan go to the extreme trouble of using his mind to visit Other World, when he wished for Instant Transmission? Why not just use that instead?
But anyway, that's just my opinion...
Keep up the good work!
Arbron |
Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2003 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off I can not begin to tell you how much I love this story. The plot in itself is very orginal. The way the story is going is great. I person love the way you came up with so many ways for Gohan to get used to being blind. TO be honest I wasn't expecting a story like this when I first read it. The whole bond thing between trunks,goten, and marron is wonderful. I've never seen anyone do a story quite like this. This story has played out well and I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter.
-Sb |
Reviewed By: homo On: May 31, 2003 08:07 CDT
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This is a really good fic |
Reviewed By: Animefan2017 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2003 20:03 CDT
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I wonder, are you going to add a new chapter? This is really getting good and we were left hanging when you haven't updated for a while. |
Reviewed By: Duh On: May 19, 2003 17:18 CDT
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Great fic! I just can't wait for the ending |
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