| "Soon As Forever is Through" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: ill-fated solitude [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story really didn't seem to flow so well considering someone dies and everyone mourns for a day or two then go on to something else. Plus, you never even finished the story. This story had a bit of creativity in it, but in order for it to be good you have to hook your readers and make the story long and descriptive.
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Reviewed By: blackfang On: February 16, 2004 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. Are you still writing???
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Reviewed By: Corky On: July 16, 2003 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I believe that you put a lot of effort in your stories and they are great! |
Reviewed By: saiyangirlie On: August 24, 2002 13:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
where is the rest of chapter six...it ends after one paragraph....? |
