| "Wanderings" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: darkchun On: November 08, 2004 11:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This used to be one of my favorite fanfics, and it still is. Just ashame that it hasn't been updated in a long time. Oh well, your other stuff is just as good, heh.
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Reviewed By: Hiryo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 08:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Full House!!! I like ALL your stories. The same thing you can apply here! Please continue that!!!!
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Reviewed By: Alex DarkFire On: December 18, 2003 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great read, look forward to seeing more, this and its predacesor have long been among my favorites to read
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Reviewed By: Myoga On: October 17, 2003 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic. Looking forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: blaze On: June 16, 2003 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Blaze Whan't more! pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssss |
Reviewed By: happerry [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 23:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like! its a lot beter then the trash i keep seing.
keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Ruin On: January 13, 2003 10:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting looking forward to seeing what you do with it
wonder if you will be fusing it with the original in any way? |
Reviewed By: Silverbreeze [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going I wonder how powerful you could make Ranma without taking from Grum. |
Reviewed By: Blazing On: January 07, 2003 23:14 CST
Comment/Review:
What happen to Merac, Ceoeff, and rest of the first character from chapter one? |
Reviewed By: the DragonBard On: January 06, 2003 01:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm.
Does Ranma have only the knowledge, or the actual memories of Sidhe? Also, why did the transformation give him all those scars? Does the wife feel for Ranma as a husband?
I wonder what will happen as Ranma goes over the... adult... memories of Sidhe.
Will be interesting. |
Reviewed By: the DragonBard On: December 26, 2002 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
As the Grum has given you his permission to use elements of his work, I say 'go for it!'
This is my favorite of your various worlds, and I'm glad to see it being worked on.
I like the idea of Ranma being a techno-mage, though I would like to see him not rely on it, as the original did.
I hope that the Warlord's wife ends up with Ranma, though not as a mother figure.
BTW: Need any help with this, just ask and I will be happy to lend a hand. |
Reviewed By: godai On: December 26, 2002 16:28 CST
Comment/Review:
love both this story and the orginal |
Reviewed By: tim On: December 25, 2002 22:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the old version of your story. The new one has a lot of the the elements from Grum's story. I would like to see how you fuse your story with some of the story line from Grum's. Are you going to use any of Phoenix plot line and other persons from the old version? I liked your take on the tecno magical items that Ranma had in the old story. If you can would you please use some of them. It would incress the difference in your your story from Grum's as he had mainly "normal" magical items. |
