| "Rite of Passage" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Liri On: September 25, 2004 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a little clarification: the 'shin' in Li's attack chant I believe is 'god'. I may be mistaken, but I think that's what it means.
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Reviewed By: Maeyan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 12:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great to see the story from Syaoran's POV. I love the way you've developed his family and his life, not to mention him. For such a major charactor, he is sorely inderdeveloped, history-wise, I feel.
Please continue? :) |
Reviewed By: emeraldiris On: April 12, 2002 06:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's so kawaii. I've never read the manga but this fic is really good. Plz continue :) |
