| "Travelers In the Dark" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vega Obscura the King On: April 04, 2003 15:00 CST
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That was what I was going to update, but I guess I clicked on the wrong document...I had just noticed that mistake. Hm...*saddened* I HAD Nessism (means Julia) first, but I changed it to Laitoste (Lauren). Heh, two Ls seemed appropriate (also, I know a Lauren who is OBSESSED with Orlando Bloom (Legolas), so i did this for her)...New chapter is being formulated in my mind right now. The other thing I updates was the category, I added Romance (due to possible ones in the future) and Fantasy (DUH!). New Chapter ASAP. |
Reviewed By: Azriel Dragonstar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 18:16 CST
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This is rather disappointing...where did you update...? Oh...and I though in chapter 1 you said that Mike and Perk's mother was Nessism. |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura the King On: March 06, 2003 15:23 CST
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Its up to u if ya wanna give me a shout out...Legolas mints taste good? I didn't try them myself, for fear that he may shoot me with an arrow from Lorien. :) |
Reviewed By: Azriel Dragonstar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 20:41 CST
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::Gasp:: A review for me and an update from you all in the same hour! The stars smile upon me this day. ::opens box of Legolas mints:: How interesting. ::bites the head off one:: Mmm...Leggie-head...
Would you like a shout-out in the Stargaze Bloopers? |
Reviewed By: Azriel Dragonstar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 21:12 CST
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Another lovely shout-out. Hannon le, mellon nīn. Sorry my updation has taken so very long. I had much too much going on at school and home...fortunately, tis all over now! ^^ Keep it up, I can't wait to see the girls! |
Reviewed By: Azriel Dragonstar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 14:09 CST
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^^ I knew you'd update someday. Nice job with this chapter. It was kinda short, but I'm not complaining, I had a shout-ou! Can't wait for the next chapter...now if only I could get over my writer's block. |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura The King [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 20:10 CST
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Well, I want leggie young, cuz Mike, Perk, Amarin, and the other elves are like 116-120. :)...I gotta get goin' on chap. 4 |
Reviewed By: Azriel Dragonstar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 18:11 CST
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Weeellll...Leggie's a bit young...Yeah, he's supposed to be 2931 years old. Approximately. If he said 500 autumns, then I think the li'l Elfy thing isn't telling the whole truth. Ah well. More updates soon, please. |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura the King On: January 21, 2003 16:32 CST
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He is not really 19...I just didnt want to tell his age just at the beginning...He looks like he is 19, just as Perk looks 20 and Callo looks 19.
Mike's real age is---117
Perks Real age is ---118
Callo's Real age is -117
In my story, Legolas is 758. (He said in the book that he had seen 500 autums. |
Reviewed By: lady_shinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 16:21 CST
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Yay! That was cool! i can't wait for more. even though you have no idea who I am am, I'm gonna tell you something that happened to me the other day. Even if you don't care. Me and my friend Tom were standing in front of the sink, and my uncle Ken comes up and says , "Excuse me, girls, I need to use the sink." It was funny, because Tom's not a girl. Get it? So then when my uncle realizes his error, I sy, "Don't worry, Uncle Ken, It's a common mistake." hee hee! Tom got pretty mad at me for that! He's a cool guy, though, so he didn't stay mad too long. ^_^ I like your fic, but isn't 19 kinda young for an elf? I mean Legolas is 2931, so wouldn't 19 be for a baby? I dunno... |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura The King [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 14:36 CST
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hm...you have suggestion for female character? I could use one female elf :Whistles: If you would um...like to suggest some thing...lol
I have 1 but i need 1 more (the first 1 is Elrond's youngest daughter Amarin).
*nods* Next chappy up:::TONIGHT!!!! Hopefully...gimme a good female character tho, and Ill use her. (Starting with the Chapter named: The Council of Elrond) |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura The King [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2003 09:01 CST
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Good news!!! I WILL BE ABLE TO WRITE IN ELVISH A LOT MORE!!!!!!!!! I FOUND A 87 page Quenya Guide online and printed it out. There are still some words I don't know, but I kno a lot more now. |
Reviewed By: Vega Obscura The King [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 17:37 CST
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I always write for FUN! THank you for the review!
I have a creative talent? Really? Cool!!!!
Next chapter will have Mike and Perk conversing in ELVISH!!!! YES, I am talented enough to find some elvish on the web. hope you like it. I will put tanslations in the footnotes. |
Reviewed By: Azriel Dragonstar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 15:35 CST
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^^ Now you have a review! This is intriguing...I wonder what's going to happen. You have a creative talent...keep it up! I'll keep reading. Write for the fun, not for the fans. |
Reviewed By: Azriel Dragonstar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 15:35 CST
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^^ Now you have a review! This is intriguing...I wonder what's going to happen. You have a creative talent...keep it up! Write for the fun, not for the fans. |
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