| "Journey" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 08:52 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was very interesting. I definately pulled at the heart strings. Very emotional. Very nice.
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Title: Oh wooooooow
Reviewed By: blue_limpet666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2005 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh woooow, I really loved that, and the end is really tearjerking! Seriously! I don't relaly read Squall/Irvine, but you wrote it to perfection, it really is just beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Linkin Fantasy On: January 01, 2003 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-Normally this style of writting seems off to me but this was really done to perfection I didn't lose anyone in dialog or description
-Spelling and grammer were good I have two people reading mine first and they miss some things so this was good to see even though I don't mind mistakes
-I've seen a lot of time compression type fics but this one wasn't like it could have been just a spur of the moment Rinoa bashing or anything you gave her a life outside of the flake that I thought only was there and the two case sceneario was nice too
-I love how you did Squall he was very much like he should be no OOC and same with the others. I didn't read this and say oh great there's a fuck up but it was all good. And the sex scenes were sensual with Irvine and roughly explained for Seifer not at all with the confusion of how could that way be different from this way.
-overall on a scale of 1-10 I'd read it again. |
