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| "Angel of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Yamisana On: July 10, 2005 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. That is plainly all i have to say. It had the depth in it, pure love. It was not sappy, yet pure. i enjoyed the reading, even though it was short. I wished there was more to it so i could see what they would talk about, but then again, that would take forever (LOL). Well, it was a great story. Hope to see mroe setoXYami fics from you!
| Reviewed By: Riley Maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 22:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG, That was ssssssssaaaaaaaaaadddddddd! *cries loudly and wakes entire house up* Ooops. I loved your writing! It was a great story! *cries again* WHY?! YAMI! SETO! OH GOD WHY?! Don't worry I love the story, just what they call, oh how do they say it, flaclemped.
| Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 09:04 CST
Comment/Review:
*pingpong* /sniffle, sniffle/ *grabs Hiei and cries uncontrollably*
*Hiei* O.O Chi-sia, Aishiteru. You know I do, but can you onegashimasu let me breathe?
*pingpong* /Cries louder/
*Hiei* Meep.
*pingpong* /stops wailing and lets Hiei breathe/ that was SO sad!!! /rereads it/ WWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
*Hiei* -_-U Here we go again... | Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 01:32 CST
Comment/Review:
Drunken Panda: *cries uncontrollably*
Yugi: Well, since she can't speak right now, I guess I'll give you her review. She thought it was soooooo sweet. And to be honest, she thought it was just one of the saddest things in the world. And yet... she's still happy; for finding a fanfic that can show bliss and joy in the midst of death.
D. Panda: *stops crying long enough to talk* I love this fic! ;-; So sad... and still so good. ^^ | Reviewed By: Angel On: January 01, 2003 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God, that was so sad. I haven't cried in..oh, I don't know how long, but I was crying by the end. The only constructive criticism I have is that it's angstier without the last chapter, and angst is good, but other than that... YOU ARE MY FRIEND. *meeps* It's so saaaaaaad... *huggles* Write more fanfics, or Shinigami comes for you. |
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