| "False Face, Hidden Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Logana On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sure, the whole concept and idea of the "loving nurse and complex patient" has been done many time before, but you managed to pull it off quite beautifully. The style that you write with is a bit airy, it lets you see the scene you describe, but in a distant way. Grammar was okay, but I'm not sure if I'm the best one to judge that... =P Very funny to read, just the right lenght, not too drawn out, but not too short. Overall, a very good fic! |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 10:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
*finishes reading* NEXT ONE! NEXT ONE! *starts running around* AHHHHHHHHHHHHH I WANT THE NEXT CHAPPIE! *gasps for air* |
Reviewed By: Sam On: June 11, 2003 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is very original. I read a story of CC in a hospital but it's nothing like this. I like any E+T pairings fic. U did a good job on the story i'm very interested in it, usually I read a story and don't come back if it's not finished. |
Reviewed By: kili087 On: April 19, 2003 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it this is soooooooooooooooooooo cool. please cont.
oh, and also if ur parents keep giving u a hard time tgell them that all most all of the geniuses that we have don't make it past high school. :) |
Reviewed By: Aileen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 17:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Very original story! It's the first E+T fan fic that I read that has a decent plot...^_^;; Anyway, I like this story a lot! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 19:52 CST
Comment/Review:
That was good so far. I've enjoyed it very much, cute E+T start ^_^. Please keep updating. I'll review again if you're going to update, okay? |
Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 04:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Akka akka!!! Must continue!!! BTW, I have no idea what "akka akka" means, or if it's even a real word. However, I do know what this means: "Syaoran hubbad ka!" ^^ I wish he was! *recieves blank stares from everyone* Ehehehe... good fanfic, please continue... fast, may I add. ^_______^ TTFN! |
Reviewed By: Corel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 19:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Finally, something different than all the other same plot lines! I've never seen anything like this one before, it has promise. There's only one chapter so I can't really rate it but it's most definetly got my attention. Now if only you could hold it and serve up some more chapters that would be lovely. Wow, poor Eriol in the psychaitric ward, who would have thought of it? |
