| "The One I Gave My Heart To" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: PerfectCell17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 19:21 CST
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Damn Pan...Damn Vegeta! I liked this fic, but I hate Pan! (I can hate Veggie, cause I'm a huge fan of his)
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Reviewed By: ReDiCuLoUsLy_gOOdLoOkInG On: November 15, 2003 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
muhahahaha yeah ohh dude i like the way you did this fan fic quite unique if you tell me and **kewl ...omgosh you have to finish this fic if you dont thens wadda saDD guy even...lolz but troture vege please fo wat that baka has done and pan haha lolz HUMILIATE the guyz ... oh well seeyAH seEYAH laTER...:)
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Reviewed By: Heather On: January 02, 2003 16:17 CST
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God how I hate that man stealing bitch!! If you decide to write another chappie, please have Bra or Trunks beat her to within an inch of her life (while Gohan watches). It would be great for Bulma's kids to bring her back with the dragonballs and she could have an affair with Yamcha while Vegeta suffers. He needs to pay for what he did with that f*cking pig!! |
Reviewed By: Heather On: January 02, 2003 16:14 CST
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God how I hate that man stealing bitch!! If you decide to write another chappie, please have Bra or Trunks beat her to within an inch of her life (while Gohan watches). It would be great for Bulma's kids to bring her back with the dragonballs and she could have an affair with Yamcha while Vegeta suffers. He needs to pay for what he did with that f*cking pig!! |
Reviewed By: BB On: January 02, 2003 02:11 CST
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pan's a whore and a home-wrecker. I could care less what happens to her. Write it from Bulma's children's pov. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. keep it up and it is u[p to you. |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2003 18:58 CST
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Rock on girl! That was awesome! I'm still trying to figure out why Vegeta did that. I'm just as clueless as poor Bulma. A sequel would be cool, but it's all up to you, after all you're the author! ^.^ |
