| "Prototype Ver. 1.0" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: loanshark On: January 05, 2003 05:22 CST
Comment/Review:
oh. my. goodness.
EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!!! EEEEEEEEEEEEVVVVVIIIIIIILLLLL!!
Tamera: -_- uhh...sorry. she's a little hyper...
heh. but tt really WAS an evil clffie...well, can't wait for the next chapter!! i'll read it when u put it up!! :)
Tamera: uhh...tt made sense...-_- |
Reviewed By: tadg_chi On: January 02, 2003 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oO YOU LEFT ME HANGING! =( At a good part too... I need to know what happens next! oO; xo; tadg |
Reviewed By: KillerOfMiaka@37.com On: January 02, 2003 18:46 CST
Comment/Review:
wow, what an origanal idea. Keep writing, I NEED to see what happens next. Not want...NEEEED! e-mail me if you update k?
Magenta Fox |
