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| "Sound the Bugle" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Susan On: January 03, 2003 15:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, how sad and depressing, but brilliantly written. I knew it was Veg when he heard his dad's voice, and bounced back with renewed determination. Great job!! | Reviewed By: Alyssa On: January 02, 2003 18:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow...
That was a bit dark, and yes, it was short, but it was still amazing. Vegeta honestly did not come to mind, but once I found out who it was, it all made perfect sense.
I wouldn't make it into a songbook. You already have two songfics as individual stories. You should just keep them that way. ^_^
Excellent work. This is extremely well written and really goes into his head and tells what he's feeling. Though you didn't put what he was thinking, I could tell just by what you said his feelings were.
Alyssa
(The song made me cry, too :( ) |
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