| "A port in a storm" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: buckedtoothrat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2004 08:38 CDT
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Plz Finish!^^
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Reviewed By: player killer On: March 07, 2004 17:20 CST
Comment/Review:
^^ Nice fic. It's very good. I'm new to this site . so this is my first reveiw. See you later...
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Reviewed By: bucktoothedbunny(flamer) On: November 19, 2003 18:57 CST
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Where is the next chapter,huh!? It WAS a good story ,but again,you did over do it a little. Well, what do I know... for god,s sake ,I'm a 11 year old kid with an OVERBITE!!!!!!!!!!!!!S**T,Now I got me all depressed...WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! :(
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Reviewed By: buckedtoothbunny On: October 26, 2003 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was B-A-U-tiful story, the love the passion, the qeezeyness of the stomach. I really did enjoy it ,but you over-did-it a little.
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Reviewed By: Shadow stone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW That is so nice (even if Metabee acted like a f****** p****)
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Reviewed By: San Greas On: January 30, 2003 08:43 CST
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Oh man, how could Metabee do that to Brass? He's downright evil, he must hate her! This story is a sad one, but at least Brass found somebody to love, and somebody who will love her back. I never thought of a Brass/Neutranurse pairing, but it's definitely possible. I hope you get the next chapter up soon, just try not to make it too sad, okay? |
