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| "Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 > » ] | Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 14:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I keep thinking about how difficult it must be to fit 15 extra characters into a fic and give them equal roles, but you do a damn good job of it ^_^ Someone really needs to keep an eye on Okura, I'd recommend one of those collars with a little bell on it, lol. What's Furea up to, wanting the dragonballs? And just as I was going to ask Van if he wanted to train or go for a swim! I guess we'll find out soon enough! | Reviewed By: Dynesty On: January 06, 2003 17:39 CST
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love is in the air *la la la la la la la* love is the air lol luv it lauren *arty* | Reviewed By: Dynesty On: January 06, 2003 17:37 CST
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love is in the air *la la la la la la la* love is the air lol luv it lauren *arty* Font Color | Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did email you, really I did! The whole story is going great. Thank you sooo much for adding Radditz in! That's exactly what me and Okura would argue about, lol. In case that email didn't send (I've been having some email probs), I think your idea is great. *tries calming Okura down* Feel free to beat her to a pulp if she sings any Christmas songs...lol. | Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 15:57 CST
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>_ | Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAYNESS AND SPIFFILICIOUS ALL THE WAY! I TOOOOLD Manda that she and Van would make a good pair, but noooooo... she only listens to the AUTHOR! Oy... Oh well, everybody's so cool so far... and ass long as I have my notebook, pencil, and inspiration handy, I'm fairly quiet... but if I don't, watch out... I'LL SING X-MAS CAROLS AND OTHER ANNOYING SONGS ^-^! Really! The only other time I'm quiet is when I'm sleeping or eating! *remembers her huge appetite BEFORE she became saiyan and grins* When dinner comes... Goku's gonna have some mean competition... >:D Appearances can be deceiving, u know? *puts drawing a group picture, putting laxatives in one of the saiyan's meals, and teasing Manda and Van on her mental "to-do" list* *grins* I haven't found any anti-social person yet who can scare ME off, especially no shy, paranoid Kitsunes! Oh, but one more thing... Where's Chi-Chi, Yamcha, Krillin, Tien, and Chaotzu during all this commotion? *gives u 4 thumbs up since she has her smiley toesocks on at the moment* *laughs for no apparent reason before prancing off to wait for the next chap.* | Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 16:09 CST
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*growls at the reveiwing part of the site and curses at in in japanese* STUPID! LET ME TYPE MY KAMI-DAMN REVEIWS W/O F*CKINGING UP!! *grumbles* Before I was so RUDELY cut off... *death glares at the site in a Vegeta manner* I was SAYING I meant to say "...'as' long as I have my notebook...(yada yada...)" ...ok... I think u people must be really tiring of me by now and my ramblings... I'm gonna go talk to Manda instead *gives her computer one last scolding then scurries away* | Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 18:48 CST
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwww... u actually listened to my random chatter!! And now I'm very well represented!! Well, 'cept the fact that I probably would've glomped poor little chibi Goten too... but then again, the little guy had his hands full! *snickers at the silly "Fury"* Well... I can always make a blunt comment on Goten's going to be as sexy as his dad when he gets older... in front of Goku! ^-^, the Son men r waaay too easy to embarass! *remembers that she has to watch her language around chibi Goten and Trunks... maybe not so much around Trunks if he's already been corrupted though* Ur so nice, it's made me feel guilty about not reveiwing yesterday... but my mom kicked me off before I had the F*CKING CHANCE! *takes a second to calm down* *can't believe Manda worked up the courage to email u!* This is so cool! Now I can argue w/ her about how glow-in-the-dark is NOT a color, then beat her up after a fairly long debate! Oh, and u can't forget to make her apply her lipgloss every 5 minutes! It can be in her magic pocket! All 10 flavors! Well, technically I think she has 13 or 14 but I mean, come on, how much can one pocket carry at one time?! And I STILL don't know where that idea came from, lmao! *smiles evily and plots to steal Manda's compact... AGAIN... knowing about her paranoidness... notices the author giving her a weird look for thinking in the review* Hey! She deserves it! I didn't get away when I ran away from the cops! *long silence* ...heh... I mean... don't tell my probation officer!!! SHE WASN'T THERE, I SWEAR!!! ...*hears sirens and freaks out* NOOOO! I'M NOT GOING BACK! *runs far away* | Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 00:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What are you talking about? I think this chapter was very well written. I think everything came together nicely. Me and Okura were going to ask you...can there pretty please be a Raditz appearance??? Everything is already super-chaotic, why not make it even more chaotic? Muhahaha! Lol, great job on this chapter, I luved it. -Manda | Reviewed By: Aries ( Tiara ) On: January 04, 2003 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo lauren, i luv the fic thanxs so much for puttin me into the story. I am happy bout that. like i sadi before, i luv the story its really original, and i dont no many authors who can pull this off, hope you do good on you story you should post this up on ff.net | Reviewed By: Van Stolin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 19:35 CST
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Very nice and you can just call me Van, I just thought that having a full me would be better. Oh by the way the conceling spell works in the way you said it made him forget he ever had a tail and fox ears, and it also made them invisble, he would not even think about if he felt a tail or the ears, the illusion would also be 'real' enough so he could put headphones over his human ears. Freaky huh. Ja ne, keep it up. | Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 00:35 CST
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*realizes she accidentally quoted the first reveiwer on the "keep up the good work"* GREAT JOB SO FAR! *crosses arms and looks smug until the halo breaks* uh... heh heh,... at least all this idiotism of mine makes u look like u've got a lot of reveiws! ...*mutters to herself* Oy, ...I need a life.... | Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 00:27 CST
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just a quick little note for future reference- my computer is in the basement, not my bedroom. ;) | Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 00:17 CST
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Funny!!! Okura here, or should I say Okra? Lol, 'sokay, that's the japanese meaning for it anyway, but I don't say the word f*ck thaaaat much, mostly it's just the usual hell, damn, bitch, and (who can forget?)sh*t ... I'm going to assume that the anger and confusion have gotten the best of me... which actually DOES happen on occasion... atempts to restrain myself R held around small children and nice religious people... *halo appears breifly above her head* Only one more question or rather, statement... magic pocket...? I'd better have a notebook and pencil in there too! ;D Keep up the good work!! | Reviewed By: Nicole On: January 03, 2003 23:52 CST
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Loved this chapter! You portrayed me very well. Keep up the good work. | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 > » ] |
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