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Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 18:28 CST
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Just to reply to what Okura-chan said, I actually like the long chappies. I know they're a pain in the bum to write, but I like'em. I think Okura's just a bit impatient for some of the real fighting to start. *gulps* I don't think she'll be disappointed anyhow...*hides under chair* |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch On: March 09, 2003 19:28 CST
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Okay, worst part- everyone's POVs seem to be longer than mine, I feel neglected ;_;, best part-Piccolo and the Teletubbie soundtrack, who'd have thought? ^-^... But explain to me y I have to be the bait!! u_u And ur chapters r getting too damn long, I can't even count how much stuff I skimmed over. This is y u took so long w/ it? U should just make more short ones! *sighs* Don't get me wrong, this story's still cool, but it's starting to loose it's zing :/ ... |
Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 13:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO, funny, not to mention looong chapter! Good choice in using Okura as bait! *applauds Sayuri for giving the mall security guards wedgies* I have a nasty feeling something bad will happen while the 7 peoples leave to rescue Kage and Venus. *images of the Buus, media, and kidnappers come to mind* *pouts* And I'm gonna miss Van! Loooved the trolly race too! *grins and chants about Gohan and Arty smooching* Great job ^_^ |
Reviewed By: stina-chan On: March 08, 2003 22:07 CST
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wow pickle's on a sugar high sweet!!!!!!!
*eats some sugar*
too much fun neh?
lol write more more muah hahahah
flamthrowers are fun nod nod
stina-chan |
Reviewed By: M.Q. [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 22:07 CST
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damn, this is a long chapter...I began to read the first part and I decided (scince I'm tired) to read the rest tommorow when my mom isn't here...oh, and I could've sworn I told you my item already...it was a neckalace (it's a golden cross I got from my mom, who got from my grandma, and yada yada) yeah, so that's my item; I'll read the rest laterz, PROMISE!!! Hehehe...I wil beat Vegeta though, I'll get him! Then I'll figure out some way to seduce him! BUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! K, I'm done with my wierd fantasy rant or whatever...Good job so far though! keep it up! =^-^= ~MEOW!!! |
Reviewed By: blood stained angel wings [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 00:40 CST
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lol well done there, that was cracked, um but does nw one else think theres sumthing between Arty and Darren *raises eyebrow suspisiously* hmmm ne ways, buuuuuuuuuu lol laters |
Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Niftiness! Thanks for the super-long chapter!!! Poor Gin...in fact, poor Venus and Kage! We gotta help them! Yayness, me and Van got together! As for 17 and Okura...*gags* She's going to thoroughly regret stealing my wish! I could have wished for world peace! At least Furea got the SK...kinda. Lol. Insanity will ensue when we go shopping, I'm sure. This is getting more interesting by the chapter, I can't wait for the next update! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 17:07 CST
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Woohoo! I wanted to write a big review, so here it is! VERY PRETTY CHAPTER, WRITE MORE SOON! |
Reviewed By: stina-chan On: February 01, 2003 01:10 CST
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lol hogosha rocks
hogosha: *raises an eyebrow*
mmm pickles are nummy
anyways write more....bah why must i pester you, i need to write too, i'm too lazy
lol
stina-chan |
Reviewed By: stina On: January 28, 2003 04:14 CST
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i'm sorry i sent you that email its long don't shoot meh....anyways i hope thats what you needed, but yesh i love the fic everything rocks life is good.....so are fruitloops suprisingly
but yesh ARTY FICS FOREVER *cough cough* review it *cough cough* *wink wink*
talk to you later it 3:19 a.m and i need to go sleep now lol
stina-chan |
Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 19:12 CST
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I forgot to mention, Okura has a weakness for Android 17's rear view. LMAO, I don't understand it at all. At least I have avenged the victims of the rice incident, muhahaha! |
Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 13:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter, Arty! Thanx for the update! Its skary to think everyone at CC is being spied on...*gulps* We might need those dragonballs later! |
Reviewed By: blood stained angel wings [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 23:49 CST
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*starts 2 cry* hes dead *sniffs* depressing even. *sighs* aw well ima b fine, thanx 4 the hug Manda :) hummm what do i want from the real world............ hummmmm......... shit i like really dunno aye, oh nah i know i cant live wifout all my black clothing and ne thing that gives me mah badass look :) lauren u gott know what i mean aye? lol luv ya
-Dynesty |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROTFLMAO ROTFLMAO ROTFLMAO ROTFLMAO ROTFLMAO ROTFLMAO ROTFLMAO ROTFLMAO ROTFLMAO ROTFLMAO ROTFLMAO ROTFLMAO ROTFLMAO ROTFLMAO ROTFLMAO!!! |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Falls out of her chair laughing* OMG, this is hilarious!!! THE WHOLE BOTTLE OF LAXATIVES!? Aw man... it's a good thing I don't have a big thing for rice, but poor Goku! LMAO! CC is a big place... but just how many bathrooms do u think it really HAS?! Will it be enough to occupy all of the distraught people when their bowels take a turn for the worse? Will they ever find out who actually did it... ? (^_^ heh, ...probably) What would happen if Okura and Riley ganged up for even bigger pranks!?! Aack! Forget the coming evil! Hell's already beginning!!! *evil laughter persues as thoughts like "Screw the damn cops" come to mind* And WHAT will happen w/ Manda and Van!? Does Okura have to find people to help her play matchmaker!? Don't mind my ramble... sometimes patience isn't one of strong points... probably y I review so damn much, but oh well! ;)... I love the way u have it now!!! But what's this that Fury wants to do w/ the dragonballs?! The world wants to know! ...hmm... I can't help thinking I left something out, but if I remember it, I'll just post it! ^_^ |
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