| "Anime University!!" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Acen On: June 22, 2004 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is nice,funny,and everything,But it's rated G and I think you should leave out some of the cursing(okay,all of the cursing.).
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Reviewed By: Tanzina&Mikana On: January 29, 2003 20:12 CST
Comment/Review:
I've just read the whole thing over again and realized you sat Inu-Yasha!! *gasps in shock and huggles an Inu-Yasha plushie* Poor, poor Inuyasha........but he was in leather. The leather, Jessica, the leather!!! You do realize that in almost every review I'm going to mention leather, right? And that I'll probably just review randomly even if you haven't updated just to mention the leather. LEATHER, JESSICA, LEATHER........*thinks leather, Inu-Yasha in leather, Yami Yugi in leather, Yugi in leather, Seto in leather, just the mere thought of Goten, Gohan, and Trunks in anything. Eyes glaze over and starts to drool before chanting*
Leather, leather, leather, leather, leather, leather,...... |
Reviewed By: Tanzina&Mikana On: January 29, 2003 19:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DID WE MENTION THE LEATHER???!!!!! |
Reviewed By: SeRoRi** On: January 26, 2003 00:04 CST
Comment/Review:
XD Goten hugged meeh!! heehee!!! Thnx sooo much for adding that part!!! i love being in the story...with *sigh* Goten!! *lovey eyes* Continue!! Its a great story so far, and leather?! *gasp* hehee!!! |
Reviewed By: Tanzina&Mikana On: January 24, 2003 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mikana: *drools about the guys in leather*
Tanzina: *drools about the guys in leather*
Both: *bow before the author* Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Merci beaucoup!!!!!!!!!!!!!
We love the story so far, keep writing it!!!!! The leather!!! Yami!!!! Yugi!!!!! Trunks!!!! Goten!!!! Hot anime guys!!!!! Pegasus is dead, yeah!!!! Thank you!!!! The leather!!!! *people around them sweatdrop in confusion. Both put their hands behind their heads and rub their necks while smiling (like Goku!). The class resumes what they were doing* Bye, keep writing, we loved it, the leather, oh, the leather! Did I mention the leather?! *both go into a trance-like state drooling at the thought of HOTTTT anime guys in leather. They may never recover...*
(P.S. don't torture Yugi too much, I would have a guilty conscience) |
Reviewed By: Starheart [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic story!!! Please keep on going!!!! |
Reviewed By: sunnyjim On: January 03, 2003 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this! PLEASE torture Seto! It's a good idea too, I would never of thought of an Anime University. Write more! :) |
Reviewed By: Tanzina&Mikana On: January 03, 2003 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue. I was reading this in keyboarding class when we had a free/make-up day and I kept laughing out loud. Can you imagine the stares I was getting. *cameras focus away from the brown haired girl and to the rest of the students who are sweatdropping* hehehe *puts her hand behind her head and smiles in Son Goku fashion* Yeah, bye! Keep up the good work! *wonders if Jessica will actually make the cute bishonnens wear leather then drools at the fantasy* |
Reviewed By: Jade On: January 03, 2003 10:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very funny! please don't torture seto to much though, he's my favorite character. |
Reviewed By: SeRoRi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WhOo!! wat a terrific start! an Anime uNiVeRsItY! wat a great idea! i wish i coulda thot of sumtin like dat..hmf..*pouts* hope ya continue! i luv it soooo far! but be sure not to write a gf for Goten. HE' MINEZ!! *evil grin*
Goten: *gulp* *runs away*
SeRoRi: COME BACK HERE! YOU KNO I'LL CATCH YA! ^^O |
