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Reviewed By: bachnelkenwurz On: March 19, 2003 09:31 EST
Comment/Review:
I hoped it would by another firefly, but I'am also content with a boy and.....oh, vegeta with his grandchild..it's so cute! I wish our new parents the best and of course the nice author who wrote this story. |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 22:30 EST
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! BABY BABY BABY BABY!!!!!!!!!! O_O AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
I'm...I'm...I'm a fan of a newborn Saiyan!!! ;-; *tears come to eyes* AHHHHHHHHHHHHH BABY BABY BABY BABY BABY BA...
...AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*faints and slams onto the ground with a big "WHACK!!!" sound, feet in the air*
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: Just out of curiousity, do you think the epilogue could have where the baby's eyes eventually turn blue? I onno...the black hair bit with the lock of lavander and dark eyes reminds me a lot of Gotenks, and I was kinda hoping that the baby might have blue eyes! ^_^;; I don't know, it's your story, and it's just my opinion. I LOVE IT JUST THE SAME!!! AHHH write that epilogue soon!!! O_O I CAN'T WAIT!!! *dies!!!*
PPS: Wow...Erm...my review got messed up before...O_o;;
PPPS: WHAT THE HELL IS WITH ALL THE SCREWED UP COLORS AND ARG!!!! O_o; *glares at her other two reviews* |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 22:28 EST
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! BABY BABY BABY BABY!!!!!!!!!! O_O AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!
I'm...I'm...I'm a fan of a newborn Saiyan!!! ;-; *tears come to eyes* AHHHHHHHHHHHHH BABY BABY BABY BABY BABY BA...
...AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*faints and slams onto the ground with a big "WHACK!!!" sound, feet in the air*
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: Just out of curiousity, do you think the epilogue could have where the baby's eyes eventually turn blue? I onno...the black hair bit with the lock of lavander and dark eyes reminds me a lot of Gotenks, and I was kinda hoping that the baby might have blue eyes! ^_^;; I don't know, it's your story, and it's just my opinion. I LOVE IT JUST THE SAME!!! AHHH write that epilogue soon!!! O_O I CAN'T WAIT!!! *dies!!!*
PPS: Wow...Erm...my review got messed up before...O_o;; |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 22:26 EST
Comment/Review:
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: Just out of curiousity, do you think the epilogue could have where the baby's eyes eventually turn blue? I onno...the black hair bit with the lock of lavander and dark eyes reminds me a lot of Gotenks, and I was kinda hoping that the baby might have blue eyes! ^_^;; I don't know, it's your story, and it's just my opinion. I LOVE IT JUST THE SAME!!! AHHH write that epilogue soon!!! O_O I CAN'T WAIT!!! *dies!!!* |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 15:15 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yesssss u updated I was waiting for this chap. That was breathtaken and kind of sorta hit home too. but anyway their son sounds so cute. I love this story very much and the wait was well worth it. |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 10:31 EST
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*cries happily*
BABY!! BABY BABY BABY!!
I LOVED IT!! What else can I say? |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2003 07:44 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sad to see this ending, it was SUCH a wonderful story!! This final chapter was just precious...I LOVED Vegeta!! I'm so glad that all the trauma and unhappiness that our beautiful couple have lived through are over, and they can now live happily ever after!!! Looking forward to the epilogue! |
Reviewed By: Rita On: March 14, 2003 20:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fanfic please continue updating as soon as possible. It is so different and has held my attention. Please update soon please please please. |
Reviewed By: classifed On: March 08, 2003 15:53 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah death to the sick bastards!!!! I hope the baby is okay |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 02:26 EST
Comment/Review:
Hell yeah!!! The entire family got revenge! Go Leilani! Go Gohan! Go Vegeta! And GO TRUNKS!!!
This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read about the baby. I'm so glad the ordeal with those bastards is now over. Dead men can't hurt anyone ever again. Great ending to such a terrible situation.
I wanted to mention this chapter was much better in spelling and grammar than the ones I kinda talked about before. I just wanted to tell you I thought you did a really good job. ^_^
I can't wait for more! I have to see the baby! What are they going to name it! What gender will it be?! I have got to know! Update soon! Until then, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 23:17 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok I want to know if it is a boy or a girl? Please wite more and keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 21:35 EST
Comment/Review:
eeeegads!! why didnt my first review work? *growls*
I TRIED to say that you kick mad ass ^_^
HURRY YOUR BUTT UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER! I WANNA SEE THE BAAAAAAAAAABY!!
love ya!
AND HURRY! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 21:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRILLIANCE! PURE BRILLIANCE!!
Ok.. this review is for all the chapters, since I JUST read them all >_ |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: March 07, 2003 17:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you must update soon the story was great lellian kick some ass and trunks and vegeta |
Reviewed By: gemini66 On: March 06, 2003 10:47 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh! NOOOOOOOOOO not goten!!!!this is a great fic ......oh i just can't wait for the next update....keep up the grear work!!!! |
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