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Reviewed By: Charlie The Otaku Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 17:08 EST
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why? why did you do that?!! must you suck all the happiness out of this fic? AAAAAHHHHH!!!!! WHY ARE YOU SO CRUEL?!?!?!?!?!
anyway, love it,keep going. |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: March 04, 2003 18:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yea you have to make somebody come in the story yea where the hell is lellian when you need her or trunks. but you must update soon |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 18:08 EST
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NUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!! O_O THE BABY!!! TRUNKS!!! SOMEBODY!!! WHERE ARE YOU!?!?!? Where's Leilani? Make her come in and beat the shit outta all the assholes with ki blasts!!! That'd be a great way to break it up!!! O_O AHHH!!!! EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!! NUUUU!!!! X_x
UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!! ;-; *cries* PLEASE!!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 00:03 EST
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You can't do that to them!!! Don't be a total bitch SSM!!! Haven't you done enough to poor Trunks and Goten?! Goten has to have this baby! You can't let this happen!!! Someone just has to save him!!! Maybe it'll be his daughter! Leilani has been training with Goku and Vegeta, I'd be willing to bet she could kick their asses to HFIL!! You just have to update ASAP!!! I've gotta know what's going to happen!!! Until then, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: charpter 12 On: March 02, 2003 13:22 EST
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Oh God!!! Don't let that happen! Trunks has still his ki collar and so he can't help. Please don't be that cruel. I still tremble when I imagine what they are going to do to our pregnant Goten. I don't think they can handle a further rape. And I hope the little Firefly stops blaming Trunks for what he did. Maybe one day she will understand what happend. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 02:12 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh no don't leave it like that. please let goten be all right. let some one else besides trunks walk in let it be vegeta or goku or even gohan.
I love this story keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: classifyed On: March 01, 2003 10:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhhhhhh are you gonna write more soon? I like the fic |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 On: February 25, 2003 11:23 EST
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So...next chapter baby, right?! Okay, so maybe not, but I can hope can't I? Trunks and Goten are back together!!! *does happy dance* I sure hope Trunks' torture is over. The poor baby deserves a break from all the pain. I feel so sorry for him for all he's had to go through. I'm glad Goten forgave him too. Now to work on Leilani. I know she's going to forgive him, right? If not, what's Goten going to do? How could he choose between his koi and his daughter, the two people he loves most in his life. What a choice! Well, I know you have a plan and all conflicts will eventually be resolved. Until the chapter is up and running (and I get a chance to read seeing as how I've been so busy lately), Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2003 18:15 EST
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Gosh, it took me forever to get around to reading this! I have been sooo busy! Sorry about that!
Great chapter. Finally, something is going to be done about Trunks's situation. I'm very glad Gohan was able to help Goten. It would have been horrible if he had lost the baby. It would have devastated both him and Trunks.
You did a really good job with the emotions. I feel even sorrier for Trunks now than I did before and I didn't think I could.
I only saw one thing that bothered me on this chapter. Chalk it up to my doing too much beta work lately, but it is might have, should have, could have, and would have. Might of, should of, could of, and would of are all incorrect. I know that's what we say, but it's wrong to write it. I'm just saying this because I used to do it and I know if you're never corrected, you'll never know.
Well, I totally can't wait for more. I want Trunks to get better. The poor baby has suffered enough! Let him get well! I want Trunks to be whole and get his child and chibi back! Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 14:57 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
arg cliffhanger nooooooooooooooooooooooo. and goten going into labor this is not fair lol j/k. This keeps getting beter and better keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 17:43 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! Oh, I'm SOOOOO glad that everyone knows that he was RECENTLY raped, and will have a little more sympathy toward poor Trunks!! He's so tragic!! I feel SO bad for him, he doesn't know why he's lashing out, hurting his love, and now Goten couldn't even bear to say goodbye to him! WOW!! Powerful chapter!! |
Reviewed By: chibi baka On: February 10, 2003 18:26 EST
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*cries* omg!! thats sooooo sad!!! *sniffs* Poor Trunks!! Poor Goten!! I hope those SICK RAPISTS DIE A HORRIBLE AND PAINFUL DEATH AND SUFFER MORE IN HELL!!!!!! *evil grin* LoL UPDATE SOON!!! LIKE.... TOMORROW!!! LOL |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 23:59 EST
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Ohmigod! Goten found out and is going into labor!!! That is so terrible!!! But then again, now that they know what caused the most recent incident, maybe the doctors can find a way to help Trunks. The poor baby's been through enough already. Then there's poor Goten who always seems to be a victim of circumstances. I feel so sorry for them all! And Leilani's not even old enough to fully understand what's going on! No wonder she's scared! I would be too!
Totally great chapter. It took me three sittings because I tried to read this at school twice and both times was disturbed by people from my classes wanting information, but I finally got it read! I am sitting on the edge of my seat, waiting for the next chapter! I know you're going to resolve everything nicely in the end, but I'm very anxious to see how. Well, I guess I have no choice but to wait. I just hope I don't have to wait too long. *sigh* Well, until then, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 07:06 EST
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ARG! If you wanted to drive me insane with that last chapter ya did it. aaaaaa the suspense
I might be willing to do a sketch or something for the story... if I can figure out what part to draw! |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 08:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK GOD THE BABY IS OKAY!!! I was worried there for a minute......and I'm glad Trunks finally let all that off his chest and got some help. Maybe now he can start to heal. I also love Vegeta for standing by his child when he needed him the most. Hurry and update..I love this story!!! |
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