| "Fireworks" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 14:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
awww kawiii!!!
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is very nice. But I agree with sango-chen about the hardon. Boys will be boys in the morning *hint hint*. I enjoyed this story none the less, it's rare when I'm in the mood for B/G fics.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2004 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great. You are an artist.
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2004 02:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
sweet! I'm sorry but i can't see goku being that innocent. i mean, he never had a hard-on before? My imagination can't streach that far hehe. i loved this fic though, goku/bulma is a really great pairing and thank you lauryn for suggesting that site, it now permanitly resides in my favorite places
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Reviewed By: Reality On: July 06, 2003 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an extraordinarily well done fic, especially considering it is a One-shot. It is not easy to produce something of such high quality in fewer than twenty pages. I commend your work. |
Reviewed By: Ginia On: March 03, 2003 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ratings? What do I know about ratings - I only know that I loved this fic. Thanks for suggesting it! |
Reviewed By: Vekou [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 10:22 CST
Comment/Review:
this story wass good , very good |
Reviewed By: DJ On: January 06, 2003 08:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad fanfic here! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 09:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to turn down the heat in the house because this fic was so hot! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 07:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo-hoo Go/Bbie goodness!!! You made Goku soooo sweetly sexy...and got his kit off!!! : D Bulma would have been soooo much better for him than...The Harpy!!! So nice to see our lovely boy get some action with someone who deserves him...next Goku/Juuhachigou??? She's damned groovy too!! Excellent fic Raven, loved it *round of applause* |
Reviewed By: Lauryn S. On: January 05, 2003 05:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice shortstory. i had ever a liking at that couple. there a so sweet togehter.
i think that would be a good to for this site i have newly found:http://www.geocities.com/risanf/GokuBulma.htm
i would like it, if would write more with this couple. |
