| "Good and Evil often Cross" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Please HieixHotaru! -Sage.
Reviewed By: Sage Orzechowski On: November 24, 2004 01:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good fic, I don't really know where you're going with this though... Who is Yami? Who is Muzi? I don't know too much about the anime, so if they arn't oringinal characters, please let me apologize for my rude question. Ps I REALLY like HieixHotaru! Soooo, ple~ase???? With a cherry on top??? =^_^= -Sage.
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Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 21:39 CST
Comment/Review:
update soon please ^^
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Reviewed By: Aikou Yami2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 18:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Yami is a girl and she is my character from yyh! She is kurama's girlfriend! I will look into the hiei and serena thing alright! I hope that helps!
I have another story with her in it and it's called Yu Yu Hakusho-enter-aikou yami |
Reviewed By: zero On: March 09, 2003 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story! please post soon! its getting better and better! keep up the great work!
What/who is Yami? And can you please put serena and hiei as a couple? |
Reviewed By: zero On: March 09, 2003 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story! please post soon! its getting better and better! keep up the great work!
What/who is Yami? And can you please put serena and hiei as a couple? |
Reviewed By: zero On: March 09, 2003 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story! please post soon! its getting better and better! keep up the great work!
What/who is Yami? And can you please put serena and hiei as a couple? |
Reviewed By: zero On: March 09, 2003 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story! please post soon! its getting better and better! keep up the great work!
What/who is Yami? And can you please put serena and hiei as a couple? |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 19:41 CST
Comment/Review:
wait next chapter! hurry! poo man lives again so hurry before he kills me! 0.o *gets tackled by pooman* |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 22:15 CST
Comment/Review:
yah! can't wait for next chap! yah! ^_^...... you should make the outer senshi come into the story! and make da peoples fight an old enemy of the sailors.... like ... ummmm.... Nehelania (sp?) |
Reviewed By: Sheenagami [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 16:04 CST
Comment/Review:
cool! need new chap now! hurry up bum head! i mean but head! |
Reviewed By: Fang On: January 07, 2003 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sounds good. nice plot. I patiently await the next chapter(s) |
