| "Reflection" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: January 10, 2004 04:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleaze update!!!
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Reviewed By: AngelEyes On: March 10, 2003 20:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!!! please?????? ^^; |
Reviewed By: AngelEyes On: March 10, 2003 20:15 CST
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WRITE MORE!!! please?????? ^^; |
Reviewed By: DJ On: January 23, 2003 09:05 CST
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I hope not to see any Yugi/Yami pairings in this story. I see them as brothers, an older brother looking out for the younger one. Anyway, I hope the new girl in the next one hooks up with Yugi. That would be sweet to read! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 21, 2003 20:47 CST
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This story is pretty good so far. I hope you can post another chapter of it soon! |
Reviewed By: DJ On: January 10, 2003 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you write the next chapter soon! I would really like to see on what happens next! This is a very good story! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: January 09, 2003 15:46 CST
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Wow. This is an interesting start, I can't wait to see what happens next. I love it so far. |
Reviewed By: DJ On: January 09, 2003 12:54 CST
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Please update soon! I would really like to see on what happens next! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: AngelEyes On: January 07, 2003 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start! Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Pandapants182 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 21:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh la la! ^^ I love this! Girlfriend? @_@ Whatever, your fanfic. I still like the concept of this thing. Very original.
Heh, he was halucinating. That once happened to me... I thought I was Yami. And everyone in town was in my room.... O.o;;; And the weridest thing was... whenever I tried to move((I couldn't!)), they would call it 'Yami's Game'.
Freaky tiki, yes. But, anyways, you must update this! Not that I'm implying you won't, cuz I know you will... right? Right?!
Yugi: Don't freak!
Me: Phweeeeee!!!!! Must read next chapter! X_X |
Reviewed By: DJ On: January 06, 2003 10:11 CST
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I have a suggestion for the next chapter. I hope you approve. Here it is!
Yugi is somewhat relieved that Yami has his own body, but is still too much in pain from the negelection from his friends. Ryou and Yami tries to cheer him up, but it is no use. However, after a few days, Yugi meets up with a new girl. She is very beautiful, sweet and caring. Not to mention a big fan of Yugi. The two meet and become good friends. Although, both like to become more then just friends. Yugi now starts to recover, coming back to his usual self. Yugi's girlfriend, Yami and Ryou are very relived at this. However, it is short-lived. Yugi's old friends (Joey, Tristen, and Tea) do something that hurts Yugi very much. It is both physical and emotional. Yugi then slips back into a depression, much deeper this time. Yugi's girlfriend, Yami, and Ryou find out on what happened to him, and they go berserk! Then, they do anything to try and cheer Yugi up. They also plan their revenge against the others.
That is all I could come up with. I hope you like it ad use it for the next chapter. You could name the new girl. Well, gotta go. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: DJ On: January 05, 2003 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice fanfic here! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Great job! ^.^ |
