| "Jakunen Mirai" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Menace to society On: July 27, 2003 07:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story kept me reading it. Nothing could stop me finishing it.NOTHING DAMMIT I WON'T GIVE IT A REST MA!!!.
I think the was you portrayed kazuya was great. It makes a change to the usual 'cold hearted bar****' type.
I just wish you didn't stop so abrubtly. oh well. Good job! |
Reviewed By: unknown On: March 29, 2003 09:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good story. I like the way you gave Kazuya a mellow but sexy personality than the mean and cruel personality that we all know and yet love about him. Keep up the good work. ^_~ |
