| "Forgiveness" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: WacheyP87 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes continue. I'd like to read the next part.
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Reviewed By: kim On: January 29, 2003 04:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a really good start!!
you should reallly continue...im curious as to know wot might happen next!!!!
soo pleeease continue! |
Reviewed By: Tsunami On: January 08, 2003 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there! I thought that this one was pretty good, but slightly odd, which was why I didn't rate it higher. A lot of fics start out wierd though, so I think that this has potental if you were to continue it, which I would highly suggest.
-Mistress Tsunami
Mistress_Tsunami@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: poisonbleu On: January 08, 2003 05:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue. it sounds like it will be a great story. |
