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| "Someone's Always Out to get Me" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: GO! AUTHER!!!!!
Reviewed By: BJ On: June 16, 2005 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi. i love your fanfic!! i gave u a high mark on the rating because i simply ADORED it! i cant wait till u write the rest!!!! if u do i would b the 1st 2 know. got to go read more Pokémon. Belinda
| Reviewed By: Dark Angel 666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
JUST read all the chapters. Okay. I'l give u reasons for my ratings. For style of writting, insteaed of using yelled so much, try shout, snapped back, shot, that kind of stuff. That's why i didn't enjoy it as much. And ur story needs a bit more body to it. Describe things a bit better. But otherwise good job. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: DJ On: January 09, 2003 08:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this is getting good! It was cool to see that Charmeleon remembered on how Ash saved him as a Charmander, then on how he evolved into a Charizard to save him! I'm glad that he has changed for the better, but I hope its enough to protect Ash from his killers. I hope the next chapter comes in soon! Keep it up!
(P.S: About that psychic person who saved Ash, I hope its Sabrina. If it is, I would really like to see a romance between them! Again, this is just wishful thinking. Its up to you. If you can do it, cool! If not, I understand.) |
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