| "The Battle of Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lunar Moon Girl On: June 19, 2003 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was very cool i like the story just keep at it ^_^ |
Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2003 17:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
*sings along to th song* you know the song does kind o fit in yet it is kind of cnfusing in the end. the chapters could se a little bit more depth to them and your sentence structure could use a little work to make it more instering to read. I am nottring to bad mouth you I am only trying to help. the story i so confusing the way its typed |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2003 18:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great Chapter! I want more! |
Reviewed By: kitty On: April 25, 2003 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, the story is absolutely great!!! I like Yami best, he, he, he, he....I hope he ends up with Amari. Please not Joey!! He's okay, but Yami rocks. Write more!!! |
Reviewed By: kitty On: April 25, 2003 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, the story is absolutely great!!! I like Yami best, he, he, he, he.......... I like it better if Amari ends up with Yami. Is he????? Don't keep me in suspense.
It better not be with Joey. He's okay, but Yami rules!
Pleaseee write more in your next chapter! |
Reviewed By: calupe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 12:56 CDT
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I like this one too! It's a great piece of work, but there are a few things that ran through my head. First, what kind of grandpa lets a five year old out on a walk by herself?! I thought that was just a little unrealistic. Ok, then you said it was ten years later, and Yugi was 2 at the time of Amari's 'kidnapping,' so that would make him twelve...when he's really a freshman in high school, hehe...and one more thing: Is Amari just going to stay in Yugi's world forever? Is the beach the end of the story?!? It better not be! I think you should have something where Amari is needed back in her other home... ^_^ I love all your fics, keep going! |
Reviewed By: shadow_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 19:34 CST
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hey ssu i would really love it if you could put me in the story as one of amries(sp?) friends pwease????*uses puppy eyes*anyways great story let me no if i be in story k?byeeeeeee*starts hic uping*damn it*curese in egyption* |
Reviewed By: Ara On: March 08, 2003 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. Please keep it up |
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2003 19:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok i know that I've lost touch with most of you but is anyone out there anymore? (an: sry JakurinBunny! That I haven't talked to you in a while. I hope to talk to you soon!) Can at least somebody review! Please! |
Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 21:09 CST
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thank for the few who are reviewing! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 09:24 CST
Comment/Review:
keep it up! ....uh....PLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEZZZZZZ! |
Reviewed By: g-dogg On: January 17, 2003 11:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it but your chapters are to short! |
Reviewed By: Yami's gurl On: January 14, 2003 16:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeah that was great! I want more! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Princess Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Verra nice. I can't wait for the next chap!!! ^^; |
Reviewed By: lastdj7701 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 17:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey! Awsome start...I want more!! :) |
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