| "The Battle of Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] |
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 19:32 CST
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I already have the next chapter ready but i won't send it out unilt at least one or two more people review. (other than Moon Princess *winks*)
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 15:31 CST
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just to let you know if you don;t know already, the new chap is up
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess AKA Sakura Minamino On: November 28, 2004 11:58 CST
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*sniff* Great chapter, but Amari's gone. Is that the last chapter or is there more? What will happen now? I miss Amari already. *sigh* I guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter, huh? Well great chapter. Hope you can update soon. I love your fic! Ja.
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Title: (it used to be just Moon Princess but someone took it and made it their pen name)
Reviewed By: Moon Princess AKA Sakura Minamino On: November 07, 2004 18:13 CST
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Why isn't anybody reviewing?! I love this fic. Sorry if I didn't review earlier. I couldn't find this fic for some reason. I really hope you'll finish this fic and make the sequel. I love this fic and I'm here to the end! Ja ne!
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Title: snowed in
Reviewed By: YamiYugiMoto On: October 08, 2004 20:56 CDT
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You should have Yugi/Yami get snowed in for a week with Marik and evil Bucora. Bukora and Marik could get mad and start beating up each other, and Yugi, (Yugi dosn't fight) and Yugi trys to get to the phone, but gets cut off, has a broken rib from the beating,Manages to get to the phone somehow. Calls Joey, tells that he needs help when the phone is ripped from his hand. Joey calls others. all tunnel through snow to get Yugi out. (Yugi could be unconsus when they get there.) Somehow get him back to Joeys house and leave Marik and Bukora behind. (I know its mean, but I'm bored now, and I think evil thoughts when bored.) Great job with the story.!
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: October 08, 2004 19:50 CDT
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Wow....! Amazing chapter! And you're right. I am thinking, "What the heck is going to happen?!" or "Is the world going to be sent into the future?" or "Will Amari die?" But from what Yugi, Tea, Tristan, Joey and Yami have gone through in the past and have succeded in every one of them, and how they give each other strength when they need it (also to Amari), I believe that they're going to be ok. *flashes smile* That reminds me about my necklace I always wear. It looks like a small millennium puzzle. It always reminds me of Yugi and his friendship with his friends. But enough of my rambling, thanks so much for the chappie! I was getting bored with nothing to do here. I hope you're going to make a sequel. I know I'll love it! Thanks again! ^_^v *gives a peace sign* (the "v" is the peace sign)
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2004 12:24 CDT
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Profile is updated (9-27-04)
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: September 25, 2004 18:49 CDT
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Hai! Hai! Hai! (yes!) I vote yes for a sequel! Please make a one!! And don't worry about your message! Also it's the same here, I'm trying to get my projects and tests done too. And I have to deal with the many hurricanes that pass into Florida. Take the time you need to write your chappies. I'll be busy these days. And also our power might be shut down because of the next coming hurricane. Ok I think that's enough of my babbling. I'll be looking forward to reading the next chappie. I'm always here to read your fics. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 22:31 CDT
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sry moon princess if that last mesage i sent you sounded kind of weird. I was kind of out of it. ^_^ Ok welli hope you guys are still out there! I'm trying soooooo hard to get this chapter done but it's like my teachers are out to get me cuz they decided to swmp me with projects and tests all at the same time! it's a conspereisy (sp?) ne way. Another reson is becuz i've been planning this chapter from the beginning so i want to make sure i have all the stuff that i want in it before sending it out. so if you guys could just wait a little longer i promise that the chapter will make it up to you. Also i'm leaning toward making a sequel to this and i already have some ideas but i want to know if i should or not so please vote! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: September 16, 2004 07:25 CDT
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Hey what was that about?! Nah! Just kidding. I think I read it on the page where you can look through all of the Anime Titles like, Sailor Moon or Yu-Gi-Oh! if ya get what I mean. I guess it's where you click the botton 'fanfics' on the top of the page and you'll see the list of anime titles and where they put their updates should be on the top. Well I hope that made sense. If ya don't just tell me. I'll catcha sometime soon. Ja ne! (See ya!)
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2004 16:30 CDT
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well i justchecked when the last time i updated the fic. and it was mid. 2003. hey if you could MOON Princess, show me where they say that so i can look there for later updates on what they say. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: September 10, 2004 17:17 CDT
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Hey if you didn't know, MM.org is going to delete some fanfics. One of them says that they are going to delete fanfics that are not updated at reasonable timing. I think they said the ones that were last updated at 2002. But just incase they delete your other two fics, I' suggest to have them saved on a disk or somewhere on your computer. Just here ta tell ya that and I hope you can get off your writers block soon. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Salior Star Universe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 13:38 CDT
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the next update so becoming in the next couple of weeks. I had a little writer's block earlier but i'm getting around it. sorry fro the wait.
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: August 28, 2004 11:13 CDT
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Alright onna!! (woman) You gotta get yourself into that seat and start typing. I know people are still reading this fic and are still waiting for the next chappie! That's what it's like for me 'We'll be there for each other forever not til the end. Forever. We support each other when in need of help!' That's what Yugi and his friends taught me. Now onna get to that computer and start typin'! *Throws fist in the air*
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Reviewed By: Moon Princess On: August 22, 2004 12:38 CDT
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Hey! Hope you'll have time to write the next chappie. I love da fic and I'm reading this fic to the end!! I hope I'm giving you motivation. I'm so anxious!! What's going to happen next?! This is one of the first fics I've ever read and one of my favorites, so I want to finish reading this. I'll be waiting for the next chappie. Ja ne!
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