| "Second Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Pauliesmom [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 12:15 CST
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Hmm I meant to put this in as well... As happy as Aki is now she will not forget her world. She is very used to sacrifice and pain. Sleep vs. Training? Blow off a chance to increase her "book" knowledge? Every weapon is useful and a keen mind is one of the best. I still say she would find a way to do both.
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Reviewed By: Pauliesmom [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 12:04 CST
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Glad to see you back. Why not combine the two choices? If she really wants to do both she could find a way. Train very early (Vegeta does.)or very late (He probably does this as well!) As much as Chi-Chi would like it, even Gohan cannot study 16 hrs a day so there would be time. Also remember that soon Chi-Chi herself will be training Goten (That is if you decide to keep to the cannon- Goten is a super saiyajin by the time he is 6-7, his mother trains both him and Trunks, remember Vegeta's surprise?)Anyway, I look foward to seeing what you decide. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: This is Savage Ray, I forgot my password so i can't log on. On: December 30, 2003 21:08 CST
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I would like to see Aki studying with Gohan and see how that turns out. Good story here. I can't wait to read the rest.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I am very excited by where this story is going and I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Silver Armada [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2003 15:29 CST
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Very interesting. Waiting to see more--wait, EXCITEDLY waiting to see more! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is actually a very good story. I am looking forward to reading the rest of it. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is actually a very goof story. I am looking forward to reading the rest of it. |
Reviewed By: Pauliesmom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 17:42 CST
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Alright, I'm really going nuts here! Now it deleted half my comment! *deep breath* What I meant to say was: "Don't be discouraged and keep up the good work" Sorry I'm sure you think I must be crazy, but you are more than likely right! ^_^ Oh and if you haven't figured it out yet the misspelled remark was directed at myself and not you. Your fic was very well done.(re.previous comment) |
Reviewed By: Pauliesmom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 17:36 CST
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Argh! I hate that you can't edit your comments once you've made them! I also hate misspelled words!!! >_ |
Reviewed By: Pauliesmom [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2003 17:28 CST
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I read the story and found it very good, please continue! I have to wonder though...who was Aki's mother? The only princess that readily comes to mind is Chichi. She was also a fighter as well as the one who trained Goten. Quite the plot twist don't you think? Imagine the first time Aki meets Gohan's mother. Lotsa angst there, humor too. This probably is not how you wanted to go but you never know. Please don't be dicouraged and keep up the good work. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 08:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! And I can't believe that no one reviewed before me! You deserve like, 50 reviews! Your fic is written very well and I hope to see more, later on! |
