Reviewed By: V-chan! On: December 18, 2003 12:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
hello! it was great work but... there was one small error (perhaps someone already told you) it's Madame (literally my lady) not Madam (literally my.. that's a good question...) and for Kira who isn't married the right word would be Mademoiselle (also my lady but for non married girls)
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