| "Bleed" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 23:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'll be honest: I have absolutely NO IDEA what's going on. The crazy thing is, I still can't wait to find out what happens next! I mean, really, I've been flashing back between the chapter I'm doing and this chapter and thinking, wow. This is cool. Well written, evocative, tense, excellent characterizations, but why is Schu in Aya's head? And why's a greek tragedy character showing up with Germanic overtones? Cass was always a crazy, anyway, so no surprises there, but what's with the shrink? Jei's bonding? What? What? Help! Must read more!
Anyway, kudos. ;-) |
Reviewed By: Jade On: June 20, 2003 22:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love these stories so very much, they have so many good twists and turns. It's to bad they can't be published as books. Please keep writing, I eagerly await the next story in the serries. My vote is for Schuldig, but I'm just strange that way, either way I can't wait to read more!
Jade (jade_huntress@yahoo.com) |
Reviewed By: Fata Morgana On: May 26, 2003 05:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahah.. an update ^^
I really like the way you potray characters in angsty mood.. you are brilliant with the choice of words.. I wish I could write the way you do... -_- |
Reviewed By: Sayiera [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2003 06:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all:you´re amazing! To write this long arc and have the creativity to not repeat yourself all the time.
Second: I really hope you will continue to write this well and keep on updating! |
Reviewed By: Nickythetokyoboy On: April 07, 2003 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAH!! Your so mean to me Nekojita-sama, I've readd all your fanfics starting with Violet eyes and I've been waited for you to get you ass in gear since last year..*sniff* I NEED MORE AYA~A~~! * falls* at least your updating shadows ^-^ But I think I like your Violet eyes arc better....yes...deffinatley need to update quicker...^-^ |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 18:22 CST
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I always love the way you portray the emotions in your stories. I LOVED Ken's and Omi's sessions with Arai...especially Omi's!
The suspense, with wondering what path Yohji will take when the time comes, permeates every chapter.
I am always thrilled when I see you have updated something. I've been following this arc and Shadows almost rabidly, which shows you how compelling your writing is. |
Reviewed By: silvertoekee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 05:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man that was a good chapter but i wonder what ken is going to do now. hmm the end was very creepy and all that blood yeck. |
Reviewed By: psychosnaz [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 23:15 CST
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Another long and awesome chapter, thanks!!! I get so happy everytime you update your fics, i love them sooo much and hope you never stop writing!!
and though i'm starting to like Schu more and more with each of your stories, i still think he shouldn't get Aya, Aya belongs with Yohji in my mind and that's not gonna change! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Samereh On: February 25, 2003 12:31 CST
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Just wonderful |
Reviewed By: Sahel On: March 07, 2003 10:34 CST
Comment/Review:
So far the best in the bleed series. I enjoyed it enormously .
I also started to like the aya X shu paring.
At the begin shu was a first rate bastard but now I find him quite smart and lovely. Two more chapters and I’ll fall in love with him . ^_^; |
Reviewed By: Minoo On: February 17, 2003 05:25 CST
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yor fics are just great. each better then the other. I love them.
I enjoyed chapter 3 beyond words. |
Reviewed By: silvertoekee On: February 10, 2003 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
cool i was so waiting for this chapter to come out and man was it good hehe. hmm can't wait to see whay yohji is going to do about asuka and aya. |
Reviewed By: Sahel On: February 13, 2003 08:39 CST
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Well I'm not surprised. what ever you write is just GOOD. No it's more then just good it's...
... oh I can't find the words unfortunatly english isn't my native toung.(sweet drops!)
sigh well never mind it doesn't change the fact that I Love your works and your style.
Your just the best amoung the weiss fanfic writers . |
Reviewed By: silvertoekee [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 08:28 CST
Comment/Review:
oh cool been waiting to see what happens next and man is it getting good! |
Reviewed By: Scented Candles [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 08:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your writing. I've been reading all your fictions, i started with violet eyes and moved on down your arc to here bleed...
i hope you continue writing great stuff and i love your work on Shadows! It's wonderful and oh THE OTHER SIDE is cool too! Weiss with powers, amazing. Anyway your fics are good and more power to 'ya! |
