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Reviewed By: Relena Yui On: July 05, 2003 20:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally finished it YAAAAY!!!!
Ok, well first of I must applaud youon your character development, especially of Wufei, most people just choose to write hm out completly or make him scream injustice through out the whole friggin fick, but you actually gave him depth and I totally love it, and I love even more the fact that you made him Relena's brother that was just perfect. I'm totally impressed with your talent to keep everyone in character through out the whole thing even though this was an AU ficcy. I was also very pleased to see that this story actually had a plot, and what a plot it was, I was glued to the computer screen for three hours before I just gave up and printed this because the glare from the compy was giving me a headache, but I had to finish the ficcy -LOL
I think the truly most impressive thing about this ficcy was how in depth you went into everything, not just the characters, but the surroundings and verything that happened around them, it is very obvious that hours of research were spent on making this ficcy what it is. I could feel and see everything as I read it, which is so rare with ficcies, or actual novels for that fact these days :)
Your style of writing is absolutly flawless and beautyfull
I wish there was alittle bit more of Trowa in it, but hey maybe in the sequel, the whole Quatre Dorothy thing creeps me out, but hey I'm a die hard 3x4 fan ::grins::
well I think my review is long enough ^_^ and now I must run off and read the sequel
Relena Yui (aka Spoony) at forkysanime@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Relena Yui On: July 05, 2003 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm only to chapter 3 right now, but loving the story ^_^, the only thing is I wish you would have written the translation to the chinese phrases :) oh well no worries, I'll just bug my friend to translate them when he comes over next week ::grins:: well, back to reading the ficcy, can't wait to see what happens. |
Reviewed By: Junior On: February 16, 2003 10:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Exceptional plot. Written better than some of the books I've read now a days. |
Reviewed By: Kasumi Tendo On: February 04, 2003 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How romantic...such a believer in a good romance. Interesting choice using these crazy characters. |
Reviewed By: J.Jacob On: January 31, 2003 13:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Enjoyed Seduction and thought it was perfect all the way around. Thought Treize was the perfect villian and since I never liked him, his demise wasn't a problem for me. |
Reviewed By: Nina On: January 30, 2003 11:56 CST
Comment/Review:
WHAT? There's already a sequel up. I'm there man! |
Reviewed By: Nina On: January 30, 2003 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil is vanquished and the Heero (no pun intended) got the girl. Well, sort of. They're allowed to date. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: purple rain On: January 26, 2003 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good it almost reminds me of a Jane Austin novel. Except this has cooler characters! |
Reviewed By: Dorothy Winner On: January 23, 2003 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My eyebrows are not scary! And I enjoyed Seduction. Though it should have been about me! |
Reviewed By: Chris C. On: January 21, 2003 08:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice conclusion to this. I've already started on your sequel. |
Reviewed By: Sammy On: January 20, 2003 10:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a winner! So nice I read it twice. ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Julia On: January 19, 2003 20:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Fabulous ending. I enjoyed all of it. Good writing. |
Reviewed By: No Pen Name On: January 19, 2003 00:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Now that's a pretty nice moment between Relena and Heero. So sweet. |
Reviewed By: Relena Y. On: January 17, 2003 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If that is the ending, it was a cool story. I hope it's not though. Need a resolution and happy endings all around. |
Reviewed By: No Pen Name On: January 17, 2003 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Want more of this! It's your own fault for writing such a cool story. Are you really finished? Is it really The End? At least have pity and give an epilogue! |
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