| "Inside a water bubble" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inu-chan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2008 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOODNESS!!! This story was fantastic! I was so shocked on how great your english and grammar was! ^___^b You did a wonderful job!!!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 21:11 CDT
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this story is AWESOME!!!! and hey you write better english than i do italian. great job.
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Reviewed By: kafeen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is an awsome story!I realy like the fact that you put the english translation beside the japanese words!Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 15:21 CST
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I think your story is really cool I hope you update soon! plz, plz, plz, Ja ne for now!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2004 22:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story. even now your still getting reviews for your incredible fic. i think u still did a good job being italian, and most likely sexy with that accent.
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 23:02 CST
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o, u finished it, srry, I reviewed b4 I finished! @_@ Anyway, great job!
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Reviewed By: sabriel7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 22:36 CST
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I really like this story! I think your english is better than most americans! (Oh, I'm also italian, born in america) Anyway, update soon, I look forward to it! :)
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Reviewed By: Crim_R [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 22:49 CST
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Oh my gosh! That was so cute! I loved it! And I think you have very good English in your fanfics. Oh... I have to go to bed now, School tomorrow... Mom's mad now... *runs to bed* Really really good fic! I like it! C ya!
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Reviewed By: beater On: December 02, 2003 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
"passion and love'and 'make me love'
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Reviewed By: miyuki On: June 11, 2003 21:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
well, konnichi wa means hello and not good morning. good morning is ohayo. i'm japanese so i know. tell me if u need anymore help on vocabulary. great story! i just might read the lemon sequel! |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2003 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it even though it was short |
Reviewed By: lola4eva On: February 08, 2003 08:19 CST
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cool. i'm italian too |
Reviewed By: razorbld On: February 07, 2003 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was one of the best! Kagome got her voice back and everything is going happily ever after... This is now one of my top five! Write a sequal!
P.S. - some primarily English speakers have worse grammar than you, it was great! |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover On: February 06, 2003 21:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love happy endings!!!!!!!!!!!!
*sniffle*
As for the vote, I would say
"I love you because only you can touch my heart"
or
"make me love"
I am a BIIIIG sucker for love stories!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: sammie On: February 06, 2003 19:53 CST
Comment/Review:
awwwwww...that wa sweet! i lovvvvve it! yay!
-sammie- |
Reviewed By: Lover On: February 06, 2003 09:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think this one sound good,I love you because only you can touch my heart.Anyway that was a great fic. |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 05:21 CST
Comment/Review:
that was a great story! I think you should write the ranma crossover next. ^_^ I love ranma crossovers! That would be my vote.
Mara |
Reviewed By: Lizzycat On: February 05, 2003 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, the spelling and grammar should be somewhere in the neigborhood of 9.999 because there were hardly any errors at all. But overall I really liked this fanfic. It was very sweet. Too bad it had to end so soon. Oh well, like they all say, "all good things must come to an end." Anyways, I like the title "Make me Love." |
Reviewed By: julia On: February 05, 2003 13:40 CST
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ur stories sooo good!! few mistakes here and there but still it's very good! i want 2 vote for 'i love u because only you can touch my heart'
keep writing
-julia
krnjulia89@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Hacen(avalonptiestess) On: February 04, 2003 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story. i saw lord of the rings.i loved legalos . hes so cute.:) |
Reviewed By: princess-of-anime-kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 21:58 CST
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lol, i kinda left something out of my last review, since inu is going to the U.S... can he live with me ;) LOL, Im so totally kidding! That totally made me cry when Inu Yasha told Kagome
*sniffle* ;-; they better be together soon... |
Reviewed By: princess-of-anime-kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 21:53 CST
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That's so good! You've got to continue!! Im dying to know whuts going to happen next, and i must comment you on your English! Very good :D |
Reviewed By: obssesivefangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 15:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm baaaaaaaacckkkkkk....again!!!.......thanks for thanking me that was really nice^_^
anyways i still love your story!!!...and as allways hope you get the next chapter up soon!!!
BYE;p
ja ne |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover On: February 01, 2003 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's so sad *crying* that's just not fair that
Inu's parents have to sented him to the U.S *crying
louder* .~_~.
PLEASE POST THE NEXT CHAPPY SOON!!!!!!
*still crying ~ why did he have to leave~
whaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!*
p.s I will still be crying until you post the next chappy!
*sniff* |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update :o) |
Reviewed By: Lizzycat On: February 01, 2003 15:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Aw, how sad but it's very cute and I really enjoyed it. I can't wait until you post the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Lover On: February 01, 2003 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Luv it. Continue please. |
Reviewed By: luna_night [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very cute very cute...it made me think about what happens eveytime i have to go back to school and away from my boyfriend...**sniff****sniff** so sad i cant wait for more |
Reviewed By: Lady Hawk [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 20:38 CST
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I love this story and all of it chapters. I don't like that Inu Yasha had to leave 0_o. Well five years aint that bad???? Keep on translating the story. Oh and congrats on your high score on english. |
Reviewed By: Ahsayuni [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 19:08 CST
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thats sad... and only the 4th chappy 2.
(u-u)>[watch he goes and forgets her...that would be even sadder.]
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dont do that. |
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