Reviewed By: kato On: February 07, 2003 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its going great so far dani. i hope you post the next one soon. Y ou should put more tlaking in to it because i think the characcters talked 5 times in one chapter. your spelling wasent great but othe then that it has a great story line...
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