Reviewed By: Elly_Leaverton [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2002 10:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I'm a Rennie too! Had to click on this one. Very cute. As for writing advice, you need more description, especially in a place as cool as a Ren Faire. Watch out for putting a different name in the same paragraph as a speaker, you did that three times and it was very confusing. BTW, Nobles wear black because it's expensive to dye something black and you have to re-dye it everytime it fades. Keep up the good work! |
