Reviewed By: Megkazul On: September 27, 2001 20:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
As an author, I've found that it's nearly impossible to *intentionally* write a humorous fic, maybe it's just me, but I think it'd be safer to aim for angst and have it accidently turn up funny... and this story seems incomplete somehow, you really ought to add another chapter... and what's up with this site? nobody ever reviews! fanfiction.net is so much more active... ~Megkazul (reply-to: nerojdog@hotmail.com) |
