| "Life together" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
Title: Life together
Reviewed By: Euphratie Baratona On: December 31, 2003 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello my name is Andrea, and I wanted to tell you that I really liked your story, for its originality. But I think you need to make Heero more like the Heero in the cartoon, by making him colder to the others and by making him seem quite distance to the others, until he warms up to them. And about Trowa I mean I liked the way you wrote for him but if you want to add a supernaturl touche to your story I think it would be cool for him to be like a 9,ooo year old vampire. And Quatre be an angle, like were their love is fobidden by they finnally get to care for one another in the end, after Trowa finds out about Quatre being an angle. And Heero could be a Pyro, Wufei a shapeshifter {mainly a dragon or tiger form.} And Duo could be a neocramancer. But i just thought that would be kool plot on a story. But I really do like your story and how you use all of the characters.
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Reviewed By: SunKat On: December 11, 2003 11:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2003 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like where the story is heading. Quite interesting idea. I like the style. Not difficult to follow and I'm looking forward to their character developments and relationships ^_^. There were a few mistakes in your story, but not really THAT big. Overall I like it ^_^
Please update soon! Keep it up!! |
Reviewed By: Annoying Review Girl On: March 19, 2003 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your style of writing is expressive, spelling and grammar are great. The storline hasn't been completely played out, and your use of the situation is unique. I loved reading it. The story really sucked me in....THAT'S WHY YOU NEED TO RIGHT MORE!! NOW!!! Hehe..hurry up, ne? Arigato! Ja! |
Reviewed By: fanny On: March 13, 2003 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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i think that this just keeps getting better and better. But why would they all need to move to a different city, like Trowa and Quater just to go to school? and what's up with Duo's mom going from one exterme to another with the guilt trip?? sorry about all of the questions, but the're killing me!!! update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
So far so good. Good intro of characters. Can't wait for the story to develop. |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 09:54 CST
Comment/Review:
yay another part. can't wait till the next chapter. unicorn_144 :P |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAVE YOU FORGOTON ABOUT THIS STORY WILL YOU EVER UPDATE I WISS YOU WOULD IT IS A GOOD STORY |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat On: February 20, 2003 22:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting story so far. Next chapter please! |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 17:19 CST
Comment/Review:
what is the deal with his mum??? my gosh! lol. I think this is a great start. a few grammer errors, but nothing major. I want to know what happens when tro and quat get to the house. *g* |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 20:24 CST
Comment/Review:
I read both chapters and loved it and I can't wait till the next chapter comes out. |
Reviewed By: fanny On: February 10, 2003 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think that it will be very good an di want to hear about duo' s mom, and when it rains where i live, its just like that!!!! and i usually have to walk in that rain for almost two miles! |
Reviewed By: mei_akutenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 11:28 CST
Comment/Review:
*claps* continue please.^^ I like it so far. Why did Duo move out when he was sixteen? And what's with his mom? |
Reviewed By: Homicidal Maniac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2003 07:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for the next chapter, please hurry, lol. greatjob on the story. :) good luck with the rest, i'll be stoping by to see a ne chap ^-^ |
Reviewed By: fanny On: January 24, 2003 11:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought that it was better than soem that ive read. i read another on ff.net that was the same basis but was boring, and this one looks good, besides, i trust that it will be good, sine one of your other one was really good. |
Reviewed By: Angel of innocence On: February 15, 2003 12:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really really REALLY like it please please PLEASE keep writing !!!!!!!!!! |
