| "Crystal Clear" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: fanfic fanaticim a poet and i didnt know it [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleeze update soon, i love the story espescially the new sailor scout idea.
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Reviewed By: DarknessAngel.com On: January 06, 2004 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The grammer is really bad. You can understand what people are saying but it is nice not to have spelling and grammar corrections running through your head while you are reading a possibly enjoyable fanfics. I like your style though there are too many predictable outcomes for the lovestuck Gohan and Usagi. Good luck writing.*_*
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Reviewed By: Chibi sailor light On: November 28, 2003 09:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, I really am enjoying this fan fic alot.Don't worry spelling isn't everything. Anyway I would like a few more chapters up to see what happens.
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Reviewed By: JuMiKu On: September 27, 2003 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, You know your spelling, isn't that great, but the story itself certainly is! Please couple Trunks/Usagi
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