| "Yamcha & Vegeta" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Oooh
Reviewed By: from Gotens ssj gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 22:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I wrote a Vegeta Yamcha yaoi a while ago... but this was so much better and totally Classic... the Goku scenes just had me in a crack of fits *hugs* well written finely executed and I'm so impressed... Great read definately! aka J'dee
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Reviewed By: K.T On: August 19, 2003 21:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I swear iv read this fanfic on fanfiction.net have you put it on that as wel look
http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=512991 |
Reviewed By: Tobe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so cool! I hope that you write more stories with those two pairings. I think that they go good together. Anyway, I loved your story so much, that I couldn't stop smiling. :)
Anyway, maybe your next story--if you do more--could be like a mpreg type thing if you're into that kind of thing. It's kind of popular I think, but you know, you don't have to. Well, keep up the good work and all! And I hope to read more from you soon! Seeya
Tobe |
Reviewed By: Nanashi-chick [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 10:49 CST
Comment/Review:
I love your story. Goku's plan was and is hillirous. You have done a beautiful job pairing Yamcha and Vegita believably while keeping with the shows line of events. |
Reviewed By: XZanayu On: January 26, 2003 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fic!! Excellent job and I loved reading it!! |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 20:27 CST
Comment/Review:
^_^ I'm not a big Yamcha and Vegeta fan personally, but that story was still worth the reading! It was sweet and funny too, ...do u even know how to put more than one genre in ur description? Just wondering of course. And good for u on finishing the story! I have that problem myself and it's definetly a time for celebration when u overcome writer's block and lack of motivation. ^_^ Happy writings |
