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"The Future" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: AznAngel6767 [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 26, 2004 20:39 CST
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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....and the rest of it is......... where?
 Reviewed By: Bleeding Star Goddess  On: January 26, 2003 15:37 CST
Comment/Review:
You keep using demo for the mere sake of using it. Demo does mean but but only at the beginning of a sentence, ga means but in the middle of a sentence, also I have to wonder why the people of Neptune, Jupiter, and Mars are speaking Japanese. I repeat, it only seems you use Japanese for the mere skae of using it. I'm trying to be rude but it does get annoying to see demon in the middle of a sentence while everyhting else is in english. I repeat, this is not a flame cause I think you could take this stroy some where.
 Reviewed By: celestejacobs [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 25, 2003 22:01 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it so far :)

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