| "The Merging of the Dimensions" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Mr What? On: January 27, 2003 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stop making new ones over and over. just either add another chapter or update ur current one |
Reviewed By: lucas charles On: January 26, 2003 06:05 CST
Comment/Review:
i think itshould be ukyoo. |
Reviewed By: the total lunatic [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 16:48 CST
Comment/Review:
If you took the time to read this then you'll know that i am the author. I just noticed that the last part of the 1st chapter didn't work and the message i put didn't either. So all i can say is Ukyoo or Akane???? |
