| "Paradise Kingdom" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: AUGH!
Reviewed By: Kaida-hime On: November 08, 2004 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sobs pitifully* Oh my God! You killed Yuugi-kun! WAAAH! So sad! Seriously though, you made me cry. Nothing makes me cry. I would honestly have preferred that they just shoot Seto (which is odd, 'cause I love my angsty lil Kaiba-bish)and Yami and Yuugi live happily ever after somewhere with bunnies. Lots of bunnies. But you got your point across, the point that love doesn't always have a happy ending and that royalty isn't all-powerful, unless I'm just reading too much into this and it was just a damn sad fic. Please, keep writing. This was wonderful. ...I have to go weep now.
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Reviewed By: ShadowWolfGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2003 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
o_o WHY DID YOU LET YUGI DIE?! I'd thought Yami would pop in and save him ._. WHY NOT HAVE yugi come back alive?! :D?!reborn, rebirth or something o_o COMMON sequalllll :D |
Reviewed By: bonnieginger4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You HAVE to continue!!!!!! I just wanna say that I LOVE your stories!!!! I first read XX09 on fanfiction.net and then I saw this story on here so I thought "Why not? I LOVE ancient Egypt fics!" And then, I see the TOTALLY clifie ending and I'm like "Maybe there's a sequal?" and then I go to your username to check AND IT'S CHIBIZOO FROM FF.NET!!!!!! OMG!!!! Ok... total run-on sentence.... Great fic!!!! PLEASE cuntinue with it!!!! You CAN'T leave us hanging like that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm gunna have nightmares!!! Wahhhhhh!!!!!!!!! Breath, Bonnie, breath.... The only thing I don't like is that it's YAOI but, then again, most Yu-Gi-Oh! fics are.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Bonnie |
Reviewed By: guest On: July 31, 2003 02:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
[1]WHY DID YOU LET YUGI DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[2]IF YUGI DID NOT DIE IT(the story)WOULD HAVE BETTER IN MY APPINION(CURSE YOU SPELLING)!!!!
[3]OVER ALL PARIDISE KINGDOM WAS A HEART-BRAEKING FANFIC!!(GO FOR A SEQUAL)CURSE YOU SPELLING!!!!!
CURSE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: UnconditionalBeliever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, great ending. You have once again surpassed what anyone has expected. :gestures to reviews: I figured though, that it would be different than what is ALWAYS written in Ancient Egypt Yami/Yugi fics. :applauds the Great Zoo: |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 17:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Aww, reading it again i cant help but cry. *sniffle* Poor yugi... |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 18:41 CST
Comment/Review:
Why did you have to kill him? He didn't do anything!! *Sobs* Poor Yuugi. And the last thing he saw and heard was Yami condemning him. *Runs off crying* |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 13:02 CST
Comment/Review:
You killed Yugi?! How could you?! That sucks! I really hope you post another chapter, and that its happier than this one was. |
Reviewed By: britt On: February 02, 2003 11:43 CST
Comment/Review:
So are you ust going to let yugi die or jump to when he put the millenium puzzle together? other than that this was a very good story!
well see ya
britt |
Reviewed By: Li's Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 06:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOu killed Yugi! *Cries* He's too cute to kill. *Sniffs* How could you do it!!!??? |
Reviewed By: UnconditionalBeliever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes! my fav. author has posted ANOTHER great fic! As usual, a 100/10!! please continue! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: January 27, 2003 19:10 CST
Comment/Review:
I like this fic so far. It's really good. I hope you post the second part soon! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG! Okay, that was a little uncharacteristic of me, but this is a f*king good story. One of the best that I have read lately. You should post the second half soon, it is really good. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Chibi Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 14:32 CST
Comment/Review:
OOOoooooooh I like so far! Please update soon! I'll be watching for it! :D |
