| "Huntress of the Night" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: larch On: February 10, 2003 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd suggest you try 'The elements of style' by Strunk and White or 'grammar for dummies' I reccomend moving away from such a predictable and cliche plot and character, as well as making her more than a Mary Sue. Try something original, something in-character. At least you fixed your biology |
Reviewed By: Rubber Duckey On: February 10, 2003 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darn, I was really happy when this dissapeared |
